Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the rtpg source package. This review will last from Friday, December 26, 2008 to Monday, January 05, 2009. Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original files. Comments about your proposed changes will be appreciated. Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. When appropriate, I will send intermediate requests for review, with "[RFRn]" (n>=2) as a subject tag. When we will reach a consensus, I send a "Last Chance For Comments" mail with "[LCFC]" as a subject tag. Finally, the reviewed templates will be sent to the package maintainer as a bug report, and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as a subject tag. Rationale: --- ../rtpg.old/debian/rtpg-www.templates 2008-12-25 15:00:26.816053105 +0100 +++ debian/rtpg-www.templates 2008-12-26 08:20:06.200052941 +0100 @@ -1,9 +1,10 @@ Template: rtpg-www/change_host Type: boolean Default: true -_Description: Do You agree to add the record to /etc/hosts? - This package is supplied with a variant of an adopted - virtual server for apache. However for this variant it is - needed to add a record into hosts. This tuning script can - do it automatically. +_Description: Add an entry for the virtual server in /etc/hosts? + This package may define a virtual server in Apache's configuration. + . + For this to be fully functional, it is needed to add an entry + for the virtual server in the /etc/hosts file. This operation + can be done automatically if you choose this option. Make the template clearer. Split in two paragraphs for readability. --- ../rtpg.old/debian/control 2008-12-25 15:00:26.816053105 +0100 +++ debian/control 2008-12-26 08:21:10.956052713 +0100 @@ -10,7 +10,5 @@ Depends: librpc-xml-perl, libjson-xs-perl, libjs-jquery, libtemplate-perl, rtorrent (>= 0.7.9), apache2, debconf, libapache2-mod-scgi Description: web based front end for rTorrent - RTPG (rtorrent perl gui) is a simple GUI web for rtorrent. It allows to - scan/delete/add torrents and also to set the priority to the certain - torrents or their parts. - + RTPG (rtorrent perl gui) is a simple web interface for rtorrent. It allows + to scan/delete/add torrents and set their respective priorities. I'm not sure I understand the last part of the sentence but I'm fairly sure it needed to be rewritten..:-) I hope that my proposed simplification does not betray the advertized functionality. --
Template: rtpg-www/change_host Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Add an entry for the virtual server in /etc/hosts? This package may define a virtual server in Apache's configuration. . For this to be fully functional, it is needed to add an entry for the virtual server in the /etc/hosts file. This operation can be done automatically if you choose this option.
--- ../rtpg.old/debian/rtpg-www.templates 2008-12-25 15:00:26.816053105 +0100 +++ debian/rtpg-www.templates 2008-12-26 08:20:06.200052941 +0100 @@ -1,9 +1,10 @@ Template: rtpg-www/change_host Type: boolean Default: true -_Description: Do You agree to add the record to /etc/hosts? - This package is supplied with a variant of an adopted - virtual server for apache. However for this variant it is - needed to add a record into hosts. This tuning script can - do it automatically. +_Description: Add an entry for the virtual server in /etc/hosts? + This package may define a virtual server in Apache's configuration. + . + For this to be fully functional, it is needed to add an entry + for the virtual server in the /etc/hosts file. This operation + can be done automatically if you choose this option. --- ../rtpg.old/debian/control 2008-12-25 15:00:26.816053105 +0100 +++ debian/control 2008-12-26 08:21:10.956052713 +0100 @@ -10,7 +10,5 @@ Depends: librpc-xml-perl, libjson-xs-perl, libjs-jquery, libtemplate-perl, rtorrent (>= 0.7.9), apache2, debconf, libapache2-mod-scgi Description: web based front end for rTorrent - RTPG (rtorrent perl gui) is a simple GUI web for rtorrent. It allows to - scan/delete/add torrents and also to set the priority to the certain - torrents or their parts. - + RTPG (rtorrent perl gui) is a simple web interface for rtorrent. It allows + to scan/delete/add torrents and set their respective priorities.
Source: rtpg Maintainer: Dmitry E. Oboukhov <unera@debian.org> Section: web Priority: optional Build-Depends: cdbs, debhelper, po-debconf Standards-Version: 3.8.0 Package: rtpg-www Architecture: all Depends: librpc-xml-perl, libjson-xs-perl, libjs-jquery, libtemplate-perl, rtorrent (>= 0.7.9), apache2, debconf, libapache2-mod-scgi Description: web based front end for rTorrent RTPG (rtorrent perl gui) is a simple web interface for rtorrent. It allows to scan/delete/add torrents and set their respective priorities.
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