Re: new draft release announcement
Hamish Moffatt wrote:
> "is upgraded" or "has been upgraded"? The tense is a little odd here.
>
> Tense problem here too ("which is translated"). Better as either
> "which is available in numerous languages" or "which has been translated
> into numerous languages."
> "have been added" (rather than "are added").
I don't know why you're so fond of the passive tense. The release
announcement is describing the changes that are present in the new
release, so present tense is fine. Thank you for the other ideas,
especially the first sentence.
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