I completed the first six chapter.....here are my final notes: General Consistency between "bootloader" and "boot loader" ./using-d-i/components.xml:After partitioning the installer asks a few more questions that will be Missing comma? "After partitioning, the installer..." ./using-d-i/modules/clock-setup.xml:In expert mode you will always be able to choose Missing comma? "In expert mode, you will always..." ./using-d-i/modules/pkgsel.xml:You should be aware that especially the Desktop task is very large. ./using-d-i/modules/pkgsel.xml-Especially when installing from a normal CD-ROM in combination with a Repetition of "especially". The first one seems useless. ./using-d-i/modules/os-prober.xml:even by subarchitecture. If it does not work you should consult your Missing comma? "If it does not work, you should consult...." ./using-d-i/modules/nobootloader.xml:provide one, or because none is desired (e.g. you will use existing ./using-d-i/modules/nobootloader.xml-boot loader). <phrase arch="m68k">This option is especially useful for Missing article: "e.g. you will use THE existing boot loader" ./using-d-i/modules/shell.xml:At this point you are booted from the RAM disk, and there is a limited Missing comma? "At this point, you are booted...." Actually, maybe better write something like "At this point, the system is booted", because the user is him/herself nbot really booted..:-) ./using-d-i/modules/shell.xml:In particular, you should always use let the installer activate your swap Two verbs is probably too much...:-) "In particular, you should always let..." ./using-d-i/modules/network-console.xml:otherwise invoke the main installation menu and choose <guimenuitem>Load ./using-d-i/modules/network-console.xml-installer components from CD</guimenuitem> and from the list of ./using-d-i/modules/network-console.xml-additional components select <guimenuitem>network-console: Continue Missing commas? "and, from the list of....., select...." ./using-d-i/modules/network-console.xml:artefacts like destroyed dialog borders or unreadable non-ascii "ASCII" is usually capitalized ./using-d-i/modules/network-console.xml:or IP address of the computer being installed. Before the actual ./using-d-i/modules/network-console.xml-login the fingerprint of the remote system will be displayed and Missing comma? "Before the actual login, the fingerprint..." ./using-d-i/modules/network-console.xml:to such host. The reason is that it will have different fingerprint, which Missing article: "The reason is that it will have A different fingerprint"
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