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Re: Anton's amendment



On Mon, Feb 06, 2006 at 10:40:38AM -0800, Thomas Bushnell BSG wrote:
> Yavor Doganov <yavor@doganov.org> writes:
> 
> > This is not a proper example.  Non-modifiability of secondary.c may
> > obstruct further improvements of the program.  This is not the case
> > with the invariant sections, which do not prevent the manual to be
> > enhanced.  
> 
> Sometimes an enhancement requires removing invariant sections.  For
> example, if you want to turn the manual into a reference card.

You can attach the invariant sections to the reference card and the
conditions of GFDL will be satisfied.

> Sometimes an enhancement requires rewriting invariant sections.  For
> example, to correct factual mistakes or express more correct opinions.

You can arrange a secondary section with the following content (notice
that only A.1 is invariant, the rest of appendix A can be modified):

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Appendix A  The Opinion of Ty Coon, President of Vice about Gnomovision

At 1989 Ty Coon made a public statement regarding the impact of
Gnomovision on the mental development of the children.  Since then
several criticisms of Coon's opinion have been made:

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The interested readers can find the full text of the statement of Ty
Coon in section A.1.  Section A.2 briefly describes the current status
of the scientific analysis of the problem.

A.1  Gnomovision and the Children Mentality

[the text of the invariant section follows]

A.2  Scientific Analysis

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Anton Zinoviev



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