Hi OdyX, I'd suggest you to put more content into the news than into the "about Debian" section, currently it is otherwise and in my perception "about Debian" is not what a news is all about ;-) The essential part that's missing is the answer on the question: Why should I go to that birthday party? The text just tells there is a party within DebConf and then instantly moves over to a generic description of DebConf (ommiting the question "what's going on there" as well), it _doesn't attract readers_ at all. Suggestions: -> Answer the questions above -> Give a brief overview of the schedule, highlighting the probably most interesting talks, for example "FreedomBox" and "Flying Rockets with Debian Software" -> Point out the barbecue and/or the party at the bar (and put that registration advice into the news, too, in case somebody doesn't read the website) Greetings Erik -- Linux User: 499744 Linux Machine: 434256 No need to CC me ;) I do NOT accept HTML e-mails!
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