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Re: Draft for lenny release announcement

Quoting Jérémy Bobbio (lunar@debian.org):

> How about something like:
> The installation process for Debian GNU/Linux 5.0 has been improved in
> many ways: support for installation from more than 1 CD or DVD has been
> restored, firmware required by some devices can be loaded by using
> external USB media, security updates are installed before the initial

s/external USB/removable?

> reboot when available, and many other improvements. The installer boot
> process has also received many attention: a graphical menu can be used
> to choose desktop environments, frontends and select expert or rescue
> mode. For Microsoft Windows users, the installer can also be started
> without having to reconfigure the system BIOS.

This is maybe a bit long. The sentence about the boot process should
maybe be shorter, or even dropped (after all, this is not the most
important new feature). Talking about the boot process of the
installer might be confusing and lead people to think they will be
able to choose among desktop environments......on the installed

This is a press release, after all, so not really meant to be
carefully read by its readers..:)

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