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I'm the French translator of the last DPN.

While translating, I found out a few mistakes. Please find a diff, in
order to correct these mistakes.


--- index.wml	2008-05-11 21:28:42.000000000 +0200
+++ index.wml.olaf	2008-05-11 21:33:41.000000000 +0200
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@
 <p>Welcome to this year's 2nd issue of DPN, the newsletter for the Debian
 community.  We would like to thank everyone for his feedback on the last
 issue of the Debian Project News!  We didn't reckoned a tiny newsletter
-would cause such an sensation - we where even mentioned in some print
+would cause such an sensation - we were even mentioned in some print
 magazines!  So many, many thanks!  We'll try our very best to come up
 and exceed your expectations!</p>
 <p>While visiting Stefano Zacchiroli the <a href="http://www2008.org/";>www 2008 conference</a>
-in china <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tim_berners-lee";>Sir Tim Berners-Lee</a> offered
+in China <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tim_berners-lee";>Sir Tim Berners-Lee</a> offered
 <a href="http://upsilon.cc/~zack/blog/posts/2008/04/unexpected_kudos_from_TBL/";>Debian kudos</a>
 for its well thought-out encapsulation/packaging of libraries.
 Paul Wise will <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-user/2008/05/msg00006.html";>close</a>
@@ -41,9 +41,9 @@
 <a href="http://www.computerworlduk.com/community/blogs/index.cfm?RSS&entryid=741";>ComputerWorld UK</a>.</p>
 <p><strong>debimg, a new software to replace debian-cd</strong></p>
-<p>debimg is software designed to replace debian-cd. It current feature set is
+<p>debimg is software designed to replace debian-cd. Its current feature set is
 very limited, but building single disks for i386 and amd64 is possible (netinst
-disks build in about 5 seconds. It still misses many features like disk sets
+disks build in about 5 seconds). It still misses many features like disk sets
 and multi-arch.</p>
 <p><strong>19 new Debian Developers this week: The Debian Project improves its New Maintainer process</strong></p>
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 <p><strong>Other news</strong></p>
 <p>Lior Kaplan <a href="http://liorkaplan.wordpress.com/2008/05/02/firefox-triage-has-ended-300-bugs-processed/";>reported</a>,
-that he finished triage of oover 300 bugs reported
+that he finished triage of cover 300 bugs reported
 against the iceweasel / firefox packages. Of those 300 bugs only 70 are still valid
 for a version of firefox shipped in a Debian release.</p>
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2008/04/msg00010.html";>summarized</a>
 the meetings different teams had during the last year in the Region
 Extremadura in Spain.  The regional goverment is a heavy user of Debian and
-sponsored teams to meet in person and work together.  Beneath those teams where
+sponsored teams to meet in person and work together.  Beneath those teams were
 the Debian Edu team, the Quality Assurance team, the VoIP team, the Zope team,
 the Qt/KDE team and the i18n team.</p>

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