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Re: draft of the release announcement; please review

Alexander Schmehl <tolimar@debian.org> wrote:
> * Gustavo Franco <stratus@debian.org> [070406 21:34]:
> Applied with one change:
> > "Debian GNU/Linux can be installed from various installation media such
> > as DVDs, CDs, USB sticks and floppies, or from the network. GNOME is the
> > default desktop environment and is contained into the first CD installation
>                                                ^^^^
> I hope it's not my german coming through me, but shouldn't that be "on
> the first..."?

Yes, on, or maybe in, but not normally into.

Also, I'd write "installation CD", not "CD installation media".

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