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Re: latest version of Debian LJ ad is ready

Dear Fredrik Ax,

> Any comments?

Yep; on v0.03:

(1) It looks quite good, now, typographically.  Only the a bit too
    short lines in the upper left box are a shame ... editing the text
    would be good, for example.

	s/glibc/GNU libc version 2/
	s/package manager/package installer and manager/

(2) I still think the lower left "Debian" should be "Debian 2"...


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