Re: RFS: ozerocdoff

[Rogério Brito <rbrito@ime.usp.br>]

Hi, Julien.

I am not a DD, but I just saw your package.

On Apr 14 2009, Julien Valroff wrote:
> * URL             : http://www.pharscape.org/ozerocdoff.html

The URL doesn't seem to be informative enough for an end user.

> It builds these binary packages:
> ozerocdoff - temporarily disables ZeroCD

More consistency in the use of ZeroCD or ZERO-CD in the short and long
descriptions of the package would help a lot. I didn't know what ZeroCD
was and I googled and went to wikipedia even. Wikipedia doesn't have any
articles that contain the "ZeroCD" keyword.

Thus, I would suggest you to improve the descriptions. Also, the long
description seems a bit cryptic. Furthermore, the first line of the long
description seems to have a grammatical error:

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(...)
 The new USB Option WWAN modem device support a CDROM device, which holds
(...)
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Maybe there is another one further down. Also, lintian warns:

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I: ozerocdoff source: debian-watch-file-is-missing
P: ozerocdoff source: source-contains-prebuilt-binary ozerocdoff.o
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In a quest for better package descriptions, Rogério Brito.

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