Re: Draft announce of Debian 6 LTS, please review quickly
- To: Moritz Mühlenhoff <jmm@inutil.org>
- Cc: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>, debian-lts@lists.debian.org, press@debian.org, leader@debian.org, team@security.debian.org
- Subject: Re: Draft announce of Debian 6 LTS, please review quickly
- From: Raphael Hertzog <hertzog@debian.org>
- Date: Fri, 13 Jun 2014 17:42:52 +0200
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On Fri, 13 Jun 2014, Moritz Mühlenhoff wrote:
> > Not only does the existing text emphasize this company support it also
> > completly lacks mentioning volunteers and thanking them for their work.
>
> That is true, that should be added.
I found it difficul to insert this in the announce without breaking the
natural flow of the news.
Here's my suggestion. Replace the 2nd paragraph with this:
<p>We would like to thank the volunteers who joined the LTS team
and the organizations which expressed their interest to contribute to the
LTS initiative:
[ … list of companies … ]
and all the others who will join them in the coming months.</p>
Holger, does that sound ok to you?
Cheers,
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