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[BTS#686212] templates://lsh-utils/{lsh-server.templates,control}



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Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, I notified you of the beginning of a
review process concerning debconf templates for jffnms.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the final proposed changes are attached to this update to the
original bug report.

Please review the suggested changes, and if you have any objections, let
me know in the next 3 days.

However, please try to avoid uploading jffnms with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Sunday, September 8,
2012, when I will coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Tuesday, September 18, 2012. Please avoid uploading a package with
fixed or changed debconf templates and/or translation updates in the
meantime. Of course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Wednesday, September 19, 2012, I will contact you again and will
send a final patch summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf
templates, updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.

Regards

David
diff -Nru lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/changelog lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/changelog
--- lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/changelog	2012-06-30 11:58:54.000000000 -0400
+++ lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/changelog	2012-09-06 20:29:19.000000000 -0400
@@ -1,3 +1,10 @@
+lsh-utils (2.0.4-dfsg-11) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Review templates and package description by the debian-l10n-english team.
+    (Closes: #686212)
+
+ -- David Prévot <taffit@debian.org>  Thu, 06 Sep 2012 20:26:19 -0400
+
 lsh-utils (2.0.4-dfsg-10) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Default to deleting host key on purge (Closes: #670433). It's only a
diff -Nru lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/control lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/control
--- lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/control	2012-06-30 11:58:54.000000000 -0400
+++ lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/control	2012-09-06 20:31:37.000000000 -0400
@@ -16,14 +16,13 @@
 Recommends: openssh-blacklist, openssh-blacklist-extra
 Suggests: lsh-server, lsh-client, lsh-doc
 Description: Secure Shell v2 (SSH2) protocol utilities
- lsh is GNU GPL'd implementation of the Secure Shell protocol version
- 2 (SSH2). The SSH (Secure SHell) protocol is a secure replacement for
- rlogin, rsh and rcp.
+ lsh is a GPLed implementation of the Secure SHell protocol version 2
+ (SSH2), a secure replacement for rlogin, rsh, and rcp.
  .
  This package contains the lsh utilities. This includes programs such
  as lsh-keygen, lsh-writekey (both programs for public/private key
  generation), lsh-authorize (for automatic remote key authentication),
- ssh-conv (utilities for converting between various public & private
+ ssh-conv (utilities for converting between various public and private
  key formats), and a number of other utilities for use with both the
  lsh server and client.
  .
@@ -38,9 +37,8 @@
 Recommends: openssh-blacklist-extra
 Suggests: lsh-client | openssh-client, lsh-doc
 Description: Secure Shell v2 (SSH2) protocol server
- lsh is GNU GPL'd implementation of the Secure Shell
- protocol version 2 (SSH2). The SSH (Secure SHell) protocol
- is a secure replacement for rlogin, rsh and rcp.
+ lsh is a GPLed implementation of the Secure SHell protocol version 2
+ (SSH2), a secure replacement for rlogin, rsh, and rcp.
  .
  This package contains the lsh server, lshd. This package is required
  to allow SSH2 logins to the local machine.
@@ -56,12 +54,11 @@
 Replaces: lsh-utils (<< 2.0.4-dfsg-1)
 Suggests: lsh-doc
 Description: Secure Shell v2 (SSH2) protocol client
- lsh is GNU GPL'd implementation of the Secure Shell
- protocol version 2 (SSH2). The SSH (Secure SHell) protocol
- is a secure replacement for rlogin, rsh and rcp.
+ lsh is a GPLed implementation of the Secure SHell protocol version 2
+ (SSH2), a secure replacement for rlogin, rsh, and rcp.
  .
  This package contains the lsh client used to log in to a remote lsh
- or ssh2 server.
+ or SSH2 server.
  .
  In some countries it may be illegal to use any encryption
  at all without a special permit. 
@@ -74,14 +71,13 @@
 Conflicts: lsh-utils (<< 1.0.2-3)
 Breaks: lsh-utils-doc (<< 2.0.4-dfsg-1)
 Replaces: lsh-utils-doc (<< 2.0.4-dfsg-1)
-Description: Secure Shell v2 (SSH2) client / server / utilities documentation
- lsh is GNU GPL'd implementation of the Secure Shell
- protocol version 2 (SSH2). The SSH (Secure SHell) protocol
- is a secure replacement for rlogin, rsh and rcp.
+Description: Secure Shell v2 (SSH2) documentation
+ lsh is a GPLed implementation of the Secure SHell protocol version 2
+ (SSH2), a secure replacement for rlogin, rsh, and rcp.
  .
  This package contains the lsh documentation, including info
- pages, manpages about the various protocols which lsh uses,
- as well as various documents about lsh internals, protocols
+ pages and manpages about the various protocols which lsh uses,
+ as well as various documents about lsh internals, protocols,
  and general lsh development.
  .
  In some countries it may be illegal to use any encryption
diff -Nru lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/lsh-server.templates lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/lsh-server.templates
--- lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/lsh-server.templates	2012-06-30 11:57:33.000000000 -0400
+++ lsh-utils-2.0.4-dfsg/debian/lsh-server.templates	2012-09-06 20:33:01.000000000 -0400
@@ -1,23 +1,30 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: lsh-server/lshd_port
 Type: string
 Default: 22
 _Description: lsh server port:
- The default port for lshd is 22. If you would like lshd to run on a
- different port, please specify the alternative port here. If you specify
- 22, you will need to manually disable any other ssh servers you have
- running on port 22, other than OpenSSH (from the `openssh-server' package).
- OpenSSH will be automatically disabled, if you choose 22 here.
+ The default port for lshd is 22. If lshd should run on a different port,
+ please specify the alternative port here. If you specify 22, you will
+ need to manually disable any other SSH servers running on port 22, other
+ than OpenSSH (from the package openssh-server), which will be disabled
+ automatically if you choose 22 here.
 
 Template: lsh-server/sftp
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Enable the sftp subsystem?
- If you want to use sftp with lsh, you will need this subsystem.
- Please bear in mind, that it's still experimental. Therefore the default 
- is disabled but can be enabled now or later by manually changing
- /etc/default/lsh-server.
+ Please choose whether you want to use the EXPERIMENTAL lsh SFTP support.
  .
- Please choose whether you want to use the EXPERIMENTAL sftp support now.
+ Since it is experimental, the default is for it to be disabled, but it
+ can be enabled now or later by manually changing /etc/default/lsh-server.
 
 Template: lsh-server/purge_hostkey
 Type: boolean
@@ -31,4 +38,4 @@
 
 Template: lsh-server/extra_args
 Type: string
-Description: Additional arguments to pass to lshd:
+_Description: Additional arguments to pass to lshd:

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