Quoting Justin B Rye (jbr@edlug.org.uk): > Christian PERRIER wrote: > > Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. > [...] > > -Template: rinputd/about > [...] > > Template: rinputd/username > > Type: string > > Default: rinput > > -_Description: Username: > > - This is the user account name for the SASL rinputd login. This has no bearing > > +_Description: SASL rinputd user name: > ^ > s/user name/username/ - this and userspace are the exceptions to the > usual rule, since the one-word technical term has a specialised > meaning. A usual, all suggestions included. > The English here is fine, but, well, I have to say that all these > dry implementation details don't really convey quite what the point > of the exercise is. When it talks about initialising a device, does > that mean creating a virtual device? Does rinputd mean that I can Great point. I adopted your proposed boilerplate, too.
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