Hello Christian,
On Mon, May 28, 2007 at 07:05:42PM +0200, Christian Perrier wrote:
> This template hasn't been proofread as it is currently unused in the
> package. I reported a bug against the package to drop all templates
> marked "sould be dropped". So don't waste time improving them (and
> translating them....or just translate them quickly).
Ok, I did not know that.
> > > Template: dhcp3-relay/servers
> > > Type: string
> > > _Description: Servers the DHCP relay should forward requests to:
> > > Please enter the hostname or IP address of at least one DHCP server
> > > to which DHCP and BOOTP requests should be relayed.
> > > .
> > > You can specify multiple, space-separated, server names or
> >
> > IMHO no comma after "space-separated".
>
> I disagree as the point is to both put emphasis on the
> "space-separated" statement and make it clearly...separated from the
> rest of the sentence.
>
> So, unless this is too frenchy I'd rather keep it.
I took several runs of reading to get your understanding. How about:
"multiple server names (separated by space)" or "multiple server names
in a space separated list"?
Greetings
Helge
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