Re: cvs commit to ddp/manuals.sgml/securing-howto by jfs
On Tue, Sep 03, 2002 at 08:05:45PM -0700, Chris Tillman wrote:
> On Tue, Sep 03, 2002 at 08:34:49PM -0400, Brian Masinick wrote:
> We would certainly appreciate your help, Brian and Larry. I proofed
> about 30% of the document last night, and I was really flagging after
> 3 hours. It is a very long document, and while Javi is a good
> English-as-second-language speaker, there are still a lot of little
> things to edit to make it sound good to a native speaker.
> Would you guys like to split the other two thirds? I ended up at
> the beginning of <sect id="kernel-patch">, and the two-thirds point
> would be about <sect id="vpn">. I did check my changes in.
Since I see that Brian already replied and is getting started, I'll
start on the last third of the document, <sect id="vpn"> to the end.