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Re: Release notes

On Thu, Dec 13, 2001 at 11:13:48AM -0500, James A. Treacy wrote:
> Here are some suggestions to clean up the language a bit.
> On Thu, Dec 13, 2001 at 03:36:39PM +0100, Javier Fernández-Sanguino Peña wrote:
> > 
> "Debian 3.0 is much more secure that previous releases. The base installation provides
> packages from Debian that do not verify correctly, limiting the possibility of
> trojan packages and making it easier for systems to automatically upgrade over the
>                               ^^^^^^ safer?
> Internet. Lastly, Debian also provides extensive documentation for the security aware
> administrator, including the 'Securing Debian Manual' from the Debian Documentation

	How about "and making it possible for administrators to set systems to securely
and automatically upgrade over..."

> "Debian 3.0 has much better internationalization than previous releases thanks to the ongoing
> work of translation teams. Debian includes default settings for more
> languages than previous releases, and more of its programs are international ready.
> This includes the installation, which is translated to a number of
>                  ^ got rid of 'boot-floppies' since most readers would
>                    simply be confused by those words in this context

	Fine by me. BTW, I checked boot-floppies and there are translations for 19
languages (are they all up to date? Don't know, ask Adam :)


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