Re: CDDs creators working with Debian
Hm, I made some goofs. Here are further corrections.
On Wed, 2004-06-30 at 12:36, Ben Armstrong wrote:
> isn't' one already available which does what you need. See if you could
Ack. Missed this one. Strike the extra apostrophe:
isn't one already available ...
And this. Because the abbreviation ends a sentence, it should have a
second blank after the period, since that is the convention used
throughout the text. Thus:
> organizations, medicine, etc. A new Custom Debian Distribution specially
organizations, medicine, etc. A new ...
And finally, some mistakes with commas. This:
> cooperation between Brazil and the rest of the world, which in the end
> benefits everyone.
should be changed thusly:
cooperation between Brazil and the rest of the world which, in the end,
And I forgot to proof the endnotes. Please fix as follows:
>  Debian Free Software Guidelines :
remove extra blank before colon here, and in following points
>  Debian Policy :
>  CDD :
>  Prospective Packages :
>  Debian Developers Mailing List :
should be "Developers' Mailing Lists" (apostrophe for possessive, and
Lists plural because we are talking about the regional lists, not just
synrg at debian dot org