Re: D-I in Release Notes update
Hi,
[I already reported this to debacle, I have no info if there was a reaction already.
Then I read the mail on debian-boot, that Christian found an error in the release
notes.]
On Tue, 20 Jan 2009 18:56:55 +0100 Christian Perrier wrote:
> A paragraph is very unclear:
>
[...]
>
> I'm afraid this just means nothing...:-(
>
> So, I'll need to rewrite it.
I found some more:
# type: Content of: <chapter><section><para>
#: en/installing.dbk:34
msgid ""
"There has been a lot of development on the Debian Installer since its first "
"official release with &oldreleasename; resulting in both improved hardware "
"support and some exciting new features."
msgstr ""
"Es wurde am Debian-Installer viel entwickelt seit seinem ersten offiziellen "
"Erscheinen mit &oldreleasename;, was zu verbesserter Hardware-Unterstützung, "
"sowie einigen neuen Funktionen führt."
This comes to:
... since its first official release with Etch resulting ...
but this is not correct, the Debian Installer came up with Sarge the
first time. Write "Sarge" without any entity?
Or:
What is this chapter about? Development since Etch, right?
So change to:
"There has been a lot of development on the Debian Installer since the
release of &oldreleasename; resulting in ... "
# type: Content of: <chapter><section><section><variablelist><varlistentry><listitem><para>
#: en/installing.dbk:78
msgid ""
"When used with a functional network access, the installer will upgrade all "
"packages that were updated since the initial release of &releasename;. This "
"upgrade happens during the installation step, before the installed system is "
"booted"
dot is missing at the end.
Greetings
Holger
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