Dear Miriam,
I think I found some typos in your nice article.
> if she/he already did.
I'd suggest you to use "they" instead of "she/he"
see e.g.:
http://lists.debian.org/debian-www/2004/08/msg00075.html
and... I'd rather prefer you use the present perfect
instead of past simple
<OK, native English speakers can [f|b]lame me ;-)
so:
> if she/he already did.
if she/he already did --> if they have already done
> We'll expand the tar.gz archive and rename it
> to the proper .orig.tar.gz file name it will need in Debian's
> building system ( <package>_<version>.orig.tar.gz ):
>
> $ tar xvfz roaddemo-1.0.1.tar.gz
> $ mv roaddemo-1.0.1.tar.gz roaddemo_1.0.1.orig.tar.gz
> $ cd roaddemo_1.0.1
>
> $ cd roaddemo_1.0.1
I do not understand when the *directory* roaddemo_1.0.1 (underscore)
was created.