On 2013-03-19 05:30, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
[please reply on -publicity mailing list] Hi all, with the help of Martin Zobel-Helas, we just finalised a press release about an important donation made by Eaton to the Debian project. The announcement is to be published next Thursday (21th): I'd really appreciate reviews and translations. You can find it attached to this mail. Cheers, Francesca
Thank you Francesca and everyone. Here is a link to the current version: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/2013/20130321.wml?view=markup
<define-tag pagetitle>Eaton donates hardware to the Debian's infrastructure</define-tag>I'd rather say just "to Debian" or "for Debian's infrastructure".
Otherwise, I see a few things which could be added:
Perhaps Arnaud could comment on the last two.