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Re: [RFR] wml://News/weekly/2011/14/index.wml Debian Project News frozen. Please review and translate

Filipus Klutiero wrote:
> here are some remarks:

Thanks, all acted on.

>> Among the consequences: [...]
>> and Adnan has taken a vacation to prepare himself for his next projects.
> Sorry if I'm failing to get a tone, but this (listing someone taking
> a vacation as an effect of DebConf 11) sounds bizarre to me.

It worked for me, given that the paragraph had already gone into the
psychological impact of organising DebConf; but it seems to me it
works better with the "consequences" here swapped with the "after
effects" earlier on.
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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