Re: Review for Debian booth announcement
Michael Hanke wrote:
> The Debian project is pleased to announce its presence at the 17th Human
> Brain Mapping meeting (HBM2011) that will take place June 26-30 in
> Quebec City, Canada . Debian will present the utility of its latest
> release Debian 6.0 "squeeze" as a robust and versatile research
I'd delete "the utility of" but other than that, all seemed fine.
Probably needs an "About Debian" section as well as an "About HBM"?
Hope that helps,
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