Re: Debian Project News 2011/06 frozen. Please review and translate
On Apr 16, 2011, at 21:38, Filipus Klutiero wrote:
> On 2011-04-16 12:21, David Prévot wrote:
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>> We just finished the last bits for the latest issue of the Debian
>> Project News to be released on Monday. We would appreciate reviews and
> Thank you David and thanks to all other contributors. Here are my remarks:
>> Even though there has been some work in progress towards getting rid
>> of HAL (still used by
>> <code><a href="http://packages.debian.org/xserver-xorg">xserver-xorg</a></code>
>> on kFreeBSD), Cyril Brulebois mentioned that <a
>> it is stalled for now</a>.
> "there has been some work in progress" does not sound right to me. "there is some work in progress", maybe?
Yeah, that is not really correct English. I'll change.
>> <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/04/msg00041.html">could
>> be adopted</a> to this end, though this proposal has provoked a great many
>> objections, whether
>> <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/04/msg00051.html">\
>> rational</a> or <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/04/msg00120.html">\
>> less so</a>.
> I don't understand the link on "less so".
I think it is trying to highlight a "rational" argument (the first link) and a "less than rational" argument, the second link.
>> As a side note, Jörg added that during the meeting Ansgar Burchardt was
>> promoted to FTP Assistant: congratulations, Ansgar!
> "promote" is strange here. I suggest:
eh? It is a promotion.
>> As a side note, Ansgar Burchardt started to serve as an FTP Assistant during the meeting; thank you, Ansgar!
>> Cyril Brulebois published the <a
>> href="http://blog.ikibiki.org/2011/04/03/DXN-8/">eighth</a>, <a
>> href="http://blog.ikibiki.org/2011/04/10/DXN-9/">ninth</a> and <a
>> href="http://blog.ikibiki.org/2011/04/11/DXN-10/">tenth</a> issues of his
>> Debian XFS News.
> X11 is no FileSystem!
I have no idea what you're talking about here.