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Re: Draft for lenny release announcement

Richard Hartmann schrieb:

>> I have added "For leisure time several new games have
> Leisure time sounds formal and cumbersome to me. How about dropping
> the prefix and going with "Several new..."? Otoh, that is a bit abrupt.
> Unfortunately, I can't come up with a better suggestion, though.

Added a FIXME there, maybe -l10n-english has an idea.

Fixed the rest, too.

Many thanks!

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