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Re: Draft for lenny release announcement


Richard Hartmann schrieb:

> Any thoughts from the others?

Many thanks for your contribution; but it just doesn't seem to fit. It's a
long paragraph and the announcement is already very long.

I have added "For leisure time several new games have
beed added including puzzle games as well as firt-person shooters.  A
notable change is the introduction of <q>goplay</q> a graphical games
browser ofering filters, search, screenshots and descriptions for games in
Debian."  Which is shorter and seems to fit IMHO better into the rest of
the announcement.

Would that be a compromise?

Best regards,

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