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Re: Please review Debian Project News

On Mon, Feb 09, 2009 at 09:43:01AM +0100, Alexander Reichle-Schmehl wrote:
> ---------------------------
> = Bits from the DPL =
> Steve McIntyre published
> [http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2009/01/msg00005.html bits
> from the DPL].  While some of the points in his report have already been
> reported in the [http://www.debian.org/News/project/2000/01 previous
> edition of the Debian Project News]
> (like the outcome of the recent votes and plans about "Lenny") he also
> mentions not yet reported stuff, like the appointment of two additional
> members to the Group of Debians System Administrators: Luca Filipozzi
> and Stephen Gran. He also thanked James Troup for his long duty in this team.

"mentions" should be "mentioned" to match the tense of "published" and

Debians System Adminstrators should be Debian Systems Administrators.

> He also mentions several points that need to be discussed in the community
> after Lenny has been released, including constitutional clarifications,
> organisational changes (like membership), technical and legal aspects. To
> not loose track about these topics, Miriam Ruiz created a
      ^^^^^ lose

although better to write it as "To avoid losing track of these topics"

> [http://wiki.debian.org/DiscussionsAfterLenny wiki page].
> Finally he mentions the declassification of the archive of the
> debian-private list, which is used for internal discussion.  Three
> years ago [http://www.debian.org/vote/2005/vote_002 it was decided to]
> declassifying (at least some of) the contents of the debian-private mailing
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ declassify

> list so that now volunteers are needed to work on this.

Would be better to rewrite this as 

list.  Volunteers are now needed to work on this.

best wishes,


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