Re: Draft for an announce about debian-community.org
On Thu, 20 Dec 2007, Shams Fantar wrote:
> Holger Levsen wrote:
> > Hi,
> >
> > On Tuesday 18 December 2007 21:19, Shams Fantar wrote:
> >> Thank you very much for your suggestions. So, I've modified my article
> >> (http://sfantar.linux62.org/times.debian.net/times_debian_article1.txt
> >> or the attachment). Tell me if it's correct. If you somebody has ideas
> >> or suggestions, dont' hesitate !
> >
> > Thanks Shams for writing this article! I've put a slightly modified version up
> > to http://layer-acht.org/dc.txt
> >
> >
> > regards,
> > Holger
>
> Great, I think it's now correct. Does someone have suggestions ?
or do it yourself as its made with ikiwiki too.
suggest instead
or you can do it yourself, as it uses ikiwiki too.
Otherwise, looks fine. [If the old wording is used, it should be
"it's" not "its".]
Don Armstrong
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