Thank you for persisting with this job, Francesca. Francesca Ciceri <madamezou@debian.org> writes: > The Debian Project welcomes and encourages participation by everyone. > It doesn't matter how you define yourself or how others define you: we > welcome you. We welcome contributions from everyone within their areas > of expertise, as long as they can be constructive members of our > community. While much of the work of the Project is technical in > nature, we will value and encourage contributions to the Project from > those with expertise in non-technical areas and welcome such > contributors as part of our community. Very good. Minor suggestions: s/as long as they can be constructive members/as long as they are constructive members/ s/we will value/we also value/ s/with expertise in non-technical areas/with expertise in any area/ Maybe break it into two paragraphs, before “While much …”. It's much tighter and clearer now. I'm looking forward to the resulting statement. -- \ “To succeed in the world it is not enough to be stupid, you | `\ must also be well-mannered.” —Voltaire | _o__) | Ben Finney
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