Re: Please review german translation of the security team FAQ

[Michael Ablassmeier <abi@grinser.de>]

hi,

On Sun, Mar 06, 2005 at 02:24:37PM +0100, Jens Seidel wrote:
> On Sun, Mar 06, 2005 at 11:10:39AM +0100, Marc Haber wrote:
> > the german translation of the security team FAQ
> > (http://www.debian.org/security/faq.de.html) suspiciously looks like
> > having been babelfished. It is clumsy and uses quite unusual
> > translations ("Gutachten" for "Advisory" instead of "Bekanntmachung").
> > 
> > Please review the translation.
> 
> Done.

siehe Anhang. Zwei Varianten wie ich den ersten Satz gestalten würde. 

bye,
    - michael

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