> Noel David Torres Taño wrote: > >> Noel David Torres Taño wrote: > >>>> * disable - individual users can re-enable data downloads (for > >>>> > >>>> instance to download data from other catalogs); > >>> > >>> for instance to download other datafiles > >> > >> Since it's clearly labelled as a "for instance" we're free to pick a > >> specific illustrative type of data file to use as our example. The > >> only reason I can see why you might want to avoid "data from other > >> catalogs" here is if that isn't in fact an option - have I > >> misunderstood? > > > > Could we remove the "for instance"? This template will be used too in > > other packages, several of them having no catalog data at all, but > > datafiles of other kinds, so "other" will be inadequate when there is no > > "this catalog". > > Yes, that makes sense now. So it could be: > > * disable - individual users can re-enable data downloads (to > download other data files) in their .kstarsrc; > > or maybe: > > * disable - individual users can re-enable data downloads in their > .kstarsrc, to download other data files; I'd prefer the first one > > >>> [...] > >>> > >>>> -Description: Tycho2 star catalogue for centralized install of KStars > >>>> > >>>> It isn't a "centralized install of KStars"; in fact I can't find an > >>>> accurate explanation that fits in the synopsis, so save it for the > >>>> long description. Oh, and google tells me "Tycho-2" with a hyphen. > >>> > >>> I thought about a typical use case (the one that twice triggered me to > >>> create this package): a computer room, where installation of packages > >>> is centralized on the sysop > >> > >> Talking about a centralised install risks making it sound as if the > >> admin was installing kstars on the server and the users were running > >> clients on their individual workstations. Instead it's "centralised" > >> in the sense of being registered in the package database (instead of > >> living in a user home directories), and as far as Debian package > >> descriptions are concerned that's just the default. > > > > The normal behaviour of KStars data files are being decentralized. Could > > phrase be "Centralized install of Tycho2 star catalog for KStars"? > > We might try to get that stated more prominently in the long > description, but the fact that this Debian package is providing data > in a *packaged* form isn't worth mentioning in a synopsis, any more > than kstars itself needs to say "desktop planetarium that works on a > computer". In the long description it will be OK for me too Noel
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