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Re: linux-2.6 wording

Justin B Rye <jbr@xibalba.demon.co.uk> writes:

> Christian PERRIER wrote:
> > Quoting Ben Finney (ben+debian@benfinney.id.au):
> >>     You are running kernel version ${running}, and the current
> >>     action requires removing the same version.

> I was thinking it might be more direct this way round:
>  This action requires removing the version of the kernel which is
>  currently running (version ${running}).

Ahhh, passive voice. Where would technical documentation be without it

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Ben Finney

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