Re: linux-2.6 wording
Justin B Rye <jbr@xibalba.demon.co.uk> writes:
> Christian PERRIER wrote:
> > Quoting Ben Finney (ben+debian@benfinney.id.au):
> >> You are running kernel version ${running}, and the current
> >> action requires removing the same version.
[…]
> I was thinking it might be more direct this way round:
>
> This action requires removing the version of the kernel which is
> currently running (version ${running}).
Ahhh, passive voice. Where would technical documentation be without it
:-)
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