On Sun, Jul 26, 2009 at 10:37:55PM +0300, Esko Arajärvi wrote: > Ganglia is a scalable, real-time cluster monitoring environment > that collects cluster statistics in an open and well-defined XML format. > ^ > | > There's an extra whitespace in the end. This is repeated in all descriptions > expect the last one. So there is - removed. > . > This package contains the 'gmetad' daemon, which collects information from > ganglia monitor clients, and writes them to RRD databases. > > Should there "writes it" instead of "writes them" because this refers to > "information"? Or is it just my ears? :-) No, you are correct. It also doesn't need that last comma - fixed. -- Jonathan Wiltshire 1024D: 0xDB800B52 / 4216 F01F DCA9 21AC F3D3 A903 CA6B EA3E DB80 0B52 4096R: 0xD3524C51 / 0A55 B7C5 1223 3942 86EC 74C3 5394 479D D352 4C51
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