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Re: [RFR2] templates://ganglia/{ganglia-webfrontend.templates}

On Sun, Jul 26, 2009 at 10:37:55PM +0300, Esko Arajärvi wrote:
>  Ganglia is a scalable, real-time cluster monitoring environment 
>  that collects cluster statistics in an open and well-defined XML format. 
>                                                                          ^
>                                                                          |
> There's an extra whitespace in the end. This is repeated in all descriptions 
> expect the last one.

So there is - removed.

>  .
>  This package contains the 'gmetad' daemon, which collects information from
>  ganglia monitor clients, and writes them to RRD databases.
> Should there "writes it" instead of "writes them" because this refers to 
> "information"? Or is it just my ears? :-)

No, you are correct. It also doesn't need that last comma - fixed.

Jonathan Wiltshire

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