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Re: [RFR] description for package bluemindo

On Tue, Jun 30, 2009 at 10:28:33AM +0200, Thibaut GIRKA wrote:
> Description: really simple but powerful audio player

I would say:
    Description: simple yet powerful audio player for GNOME

I don't think the 'really' is necessary, and 'yet' stops it sounding
like the two attributes are contradictory. You can use 'really' in the
long description to give some emphasis without wasting words in the
short description. As it's built with PyGTK, I'm assuming it's primarily
for the GNOME desktop.

>  Features include:
>    * Download pictures for artists and album or lyrics of the current
>      playing song

Sounds like a 'you can..' sentence, instead of a feature posessed by the
software. Suggestion:

    * Automatic downloading of artwork and lyrics for the current song

The rest sounds fine - good job!

Jonathan Wiltshire

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