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Re: Proof reading of a new debconf question



(Please CC me on replies, thanks!)

On 2009-02-25 at 08:35:35, Christian Perrier wrote:
> The weakness here is having the long description be in some way
> "dependent" of the short one, to get the full meaning.

That's a fair point. I wasn't really satisfied with my version either.

>  Please choose whet[h]er you want to use SSL connections to
>  the SMTP server.
>  .
>  If you choose this option, data exchanged with the server will
>  be encrypted.

One thing which I think is missing from this is the fact that not all
servers support SSL. Perhaps something like this would be better?

>  If your server supports SSL and you choose this option, data exchanged
>  with the SMTP server will be encrypted.

Cheers,
Francois


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