Re: [RFR] new and old gpsd template
Bernd Zeimetz <bernd@bzed.de> wrote:
> thanks a lot for the reviews and comments! The final version is attached
> to this mail. If you think there's something wrong with it, please let
> me know, otherwise I'll ask for translations in a few days.
I already pointed out something wrong with this bit:-
> _Description: Device the GPS receiver is attached to:
Trailing prepositions are jarring at best. Also, do GPS receivers
need to be *attached* to anything, in these days of Bluetooth and so on?
I suggested "Device used by the GPS receiver:"
> Please enter the device the GPS receiver is attached to. This will probably be
> something like /dev/ttyS0 or /dev/ttyUSB0.
Trailing preposition and a . following a device name is confusing.
Replace with:-
Enter the device used by the GPS receiver. It will probably be something
like /dev/ttyS0 or /dev/ttyUSB0
Other bits seem fine to me.
Regards,
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