[Date Prev][Date Next] [Thread Prev][Thread Next] [Date Index] [Thread Index]

Re: [RFR] templates://update-inetd/{templates}



Christian Perrier wrote:
> Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.

>  Template: update-inetd/ask-entry-present
[...]
> + The ${inetdcf} configuration file contains multiple entries for the
> + '${service}' service. Please confirm that you agree to remove these
> + entries.

"The ${inetdcf} configuration file" sounds as if we're talking about
the configuration file for ${inetdcf} (cf. update-exim4.conf.conf!).
We could switch it round:

    There are multiple entries in ${inetdcf} for the '${service}' service.

(Twice)

>  Package: update-inetd
[...]
> -Description: inetd.conf updater
> +Description: updating utility for inetd superserver configuration file
>   This package provides a program used by other packages to automatically
>   update /etc/inetd.conf.

I think if we add to the long description we can get away with less in the
synopsis. 

   Description: inetd configuration file updater
    This package provides a program used by other packages to automatically
    update /etc/inetd.conf, the configuration file shared by all
    implementations of the Internet super-server.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
--- ../update-inetd.old/debian/templates	2008-02-04 15:23:41.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/templates	2008-02-05 10:25:54.000000000 +0000
@@ -13,12 +13,12 @@
 Default: true
 #flag:translate!:3,5
 _Description: Leave existing entry and continue without changes?
- Trying to add the following entry:
+ An unrecognized entry for ${sservice} was found in ${inetdcf} while
+ trying to add the following entry:
  .
  ${newentry}
  .
- There is already a not recognised entry for ${sservice} in ${inetdcf},
- Here is what it looks like:
+ The unrecognized entry is:
  .
  ${lookslike}
 
@@ -26,13 +26,12 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Remove inetd entries?
- ${inetdcf} contains multiple entries for the `${service}' service. You're
- about to remove these entries.
+ There are multiple entries in ${inetdcf} for the '${service}' service.
+ Please confirm that you agree to remove these entries.
 
 Template: update-inetd/ask-disable-entries
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Disable inetd entries?
- ${inetdcf} contains multiple entries for the `${service}' service. You're
- about to disable these entries.
-
+ There are multiple entries in ${inetdcf} for the '${service}' service.
+ Please confirm that you agree to disable these entries.
--- ../update-inetd.old/debian/control	2008-02-04 16:16:19.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/control	2008-02-05 10:26:46.000000000 +0000
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 Architecture: all
 Conflicts: netbase (<< 4.27)
 Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0
-Description: inetd.conf updater
+Description: inetd configuration file updater
  This package provides a program used by other packages to automatically
- update /etc/inetd.conf.
+ update /etc/inetd.conf, the configuration file shared by all
+ implementations of the Internet super-server.
Template: update-inetd/title
Type: title
_Description: Configuring service: ${service}

Template: update-inetd/ask-several-entries
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Ignore multiple entries and continue without changes?
 There are several entries for ${sservice} in ${inetdcf}.

Template: update-inetd/ask-entry-present
Type: boolean
Default: true
#flag:translate!:3,5
_Description: Leave existing entry and continue without changes?
 An unrecognized entry for ${sservice} was found in ${inetdcf} while
 trying to add the following entry:
 .
 ${newentry}
 .
 The unrecognized entry is:
 .
 ${lookslike}

Template: update-inetd/ask-remove-entries
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Remove inetd entries?
 There are multiple entries in ${inetdcf} for the '${service}' service.
 Please confirm that you agree to remove these entries.

Template: update-inetd/ask-disable-entries
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Disable inetd entries?
 There are multiple entries in ${inetdcf} for the '${service}' service.
 Please confirm that you agree to disable these entries.
Source: update-inetd
Section: admin
Priority: important
Maintainer: Luk Claes <luk@debian.org>
Standards-Version: 3.7.3
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 6), po-debconf

Package: update-inetd
Architecture: all
Conflicts: netbase (<< 4.27)
Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0
Description: inetd configuration file updater
 This package provides a program used by other packages to automatically
 update /etc/inetd.conf, the configuration file shared by all
 implementations of the Internet super-server.

Reply to: