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Re: [RFR] templates://lwat/{templates}



Christian Perrier wrote:
> Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.

I like all your changes, but I'd like to add more.

>  Template: shared/ldapns/base-dn
>  Type: string
>  Default: dc=example,dc=net
>  _Description: LDAP DN base:
>   Please enter the "Distinguished Name" (DN) of the LDAP base where all
>+  groups, people, machines, etc. are listed.

"LDAP base"?  "LDAP DN base"?  No, surely it's the "base DN" of an
"LDAP server" (or you might say it's the DN of the LDAP directory).
Oh, and as ususal, ".org".

  Default: dc=example,dc=org
  _Description: LDAP base DN:
   Please enter the "Distinguished Name" (DN) of the LDAP server where all
   groups, people, machines, etc. are listed.

> Template: lwat/uselisgroup
[...]
> _Description: Should lwat use lisGroups?

The text below says it's:

  _Description: Should lwat use lisGroup?

> Template: lwat/minPwLength
> Type: string
> Default: 5
> _Description: Minimum length of the password for users:
>  Please choose the minimum length for users' passwords.
>  .
>  By default, lwat will autogenerate 8 characters long passwords.

(It will?  Even with "Default: 5"?)

  _Description: Minimum length of users' passwords:
   Please choose the minimum length for users' passwords.
   .
   By default, lwat will autogenerate passwords 8 characters long.
 
> Template: lwat/minPwNumber
[...]
> _Description: Minimum number of digits (characters 0-9) in passwords:

(Do we really need to explain what digits are?)

> Template: lwat/templates
[...]
> _Description: User account creation template:
>  Lwat uses templates for creating user accounts, to make sure that
>  home directories are placed in the right locations, users
>  are member of the correct groups, etc.

That's "are members of", or "belong to", or just "are in".
 

> Package: lwat
[...]
>  Lwat is an web based administration tool which aims to 
>  provide a fully functional administration tool for user-,
>  host-, group-, and netgroup administration.  

Please could we have something like:

   This package aims to provide a fully functional interface,
   accessible via a web browser, for administration of users,
   groups, netgroups and hosts under LDAP.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
--- ../lwat.old/debian/templates	2008-01-17 12:37:14.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/templates	2008-01-21 18:36:12.000000000 +0000
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 Template: lwat/domain
 Type: string
 Default: example.net
-_Description: Domain name of your server:
- Please enter the domain your server belongs to.
+_Description: Server domain name:
+ Please enter the domain this server belongs to.
 
 Template: shared/ldapns/ldap-server
 Type: string
@@ -13,14 +13,14 @@
 Template: shared/ldapns/base-dn
 Type: string
 Default: dc=example,dc=net
-_Description: LDAP DN base:
- Please enter the "Distinguished Name" (DN) of the LDAP base where all
- groups, people, machines, etc. are located.
+_Description: LDAP base DN:
+ Please enter the "Distinguished Name" (DN) of the LDAP server where all
+ groups, people, machines, etc. are listed.
 
 Template: lwat/uselisgroup
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Should lwat use lisGroups?
+_Description: Should lwat use lisGroup?
  Debian Edu/Skolelinux uses a private schema called lisGroup to
  differentiate between various group types. You should choose this
  option if you are testing lwat on an old Skolelinux server, and still
@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@
 Template: lwat/minPwLength
 Type: string
 Default: 5
-_Description: Minimum length of the password for users:
+_Description: Minimum length of users' passwords:
  Please choose the minimum length for users' passwords.
  .
- By default, lwat will autogenerate 8 characters long passwords.
+ By default, lwat will autogenerate passwords 8 characters long.
 
 Template: lwat/minPwNumber
 Type: string
@@ -120,12 +120,14 @@
 _Description: User account creation template:
  Lwat uses templates for creating user accounts, to make sure that
  home directories are placed in the right locations, users
- are member of the correct groups, etc.
+ are members of the correct groups, etc.
 
 Template: lwat/incompatiblesettings
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Rewrite smarty template and compile dir?
- lwat 0.17 is incompatible with some values set in older configuration files. 
- So for a correct usage of lwat you'll have to fix these settings. The package will
- fix this for you if you enter yes here.
+_Description: Fix 'smarty template' and 'compile dir' settings?
+ Version 0.17 of lwat is incompatible with some values set in older
+ configuration files. These settings must be fixed for lwat to work
+ properly.
+ .
+ Please choose whether these settings should be fixed automatically.
--- ../lwat.old/debian/control	2008-01-17 12:37:16.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/control	2008-01-21 17:12:46.000000000 +0000
@@ -12,6 +12,6 @@
 Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0, libapache2-mod-php5, php5-ldap, php5, php5-cli, apache2, smarty-gettext
 Suggests: wget
 Description: LDAP Web-based Administration Tool
- Lwat is an web based administration tool which aims to 
- provide a fully functional administration tool for user-,
- host-, group-, and netgroup administration.  
+ This package aims to provide a fully functional interface,
+ accessible via a web browser, for administration of users,
+ groups, netgroups and hosts under LDAP.
Template: lwat/domain
Type: string
Default: example.net
_Description: Server domain name:
 Please enter the domain this server belongs to.

Template: shared/ldapns/ldap-server
Type: string
Default: ldap
_Description: LDAP server host:
 Please enter the LDAP host which lwat will connect to.

Template: shared/ldapns/base-dn
Type: string
Default: dc=example,dc=net
_Description: LDAP base DN:
 Please enter the "Distinguished Name" (DN) of the LDAP server where all
 groups, people, machines, etc. are listed.

Template: lwat/uselisgroup
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Should lwat use lisGroup?
 Debian Edu/Skolelinux uses a private schema called lisGroup to
 differentiate between various group types. You should choose this
 option if you are testing lwat on an old Skolelinux server, and still
 want to be able to use the webmin module wlus.
 .
 If you do not choose this option, the AuthGroup setting will be used
 to create a groupOfMembers.

Template: lwat/homedirlocation
Type: string
Default: /home
_Description: Location of users' home directories:
 Please enter the path where the personal (home) directories of all
 users are stored.

Template: lwat/groupprefix
Type: string
Default: ou=Group
_Description: Prefix for groups on the LDAP server:
 Please enter the prefix under which the groups information is
 stored.
 .
 Do not include the DN prefix in this setting. It will be automatically
 added in the generated configuration file.

Template: lwat/authprefix
Type: string
Default: ou=AuthGroup
_Description: Prefix for authorization groups on the LDAP server:
 Please enter the prefix under which the authorization groups
 information is stored.
 .
 Do not include the DN prefix in this setting. It will be automatically
 added in the generated configuration file.

Template: lwat/hostprefix
Type: string
Default: ou=Hosts
_Description: Prefix for hosts on the LDAP server:
 Please enter the prefix under which the hosts information is
 stored.
 .
 Do not include the DN prefix in this setting. It will be automatically
 added in the generated configuration file.

Template: lwat/netgroupprefix
Type: string
Default: ou=Netgroup
_Description: Prefix for netgroups on the LDAP server:
 Please enter the prefix under which the netgroups information is
 stored. 
 .
 Do not include the DN prefix in this setting. It will be automatically
 added in the generated configuration file.

Template: lwat/minPwLength
Type: string
Default: 5
_Description: Minimum length of users' passwords:
 Please choose the minimum length for users' passwords.
 .
 By default, lwat will autogenerate passwords 8 characters long.

Template: lwat/minPwNumber
Type: string
Default: 1
_Description: Minimum number of digits (characters 0-9) in passwords:
 Please enter the minimum number of characters in the 0-9 range that
 will be mandatory in users' passwords.

Template: lwat/minPwUpper
Type: string
Default: 1
_Description: Minimum number of uppercase letters in passwords:
 Please enter the minimum number of uppercase letters that will be
 mandatory in users' passwords.

Template: lwat/minPwLower
Type: string
Default: 1
_Description: Minimum number of lowercase letters in passwords:
 Please enter the minimum number of lowercase letters that will be
 mandatory in users' passwords.

Template: lwat/allowPwSet
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Authorize admins to choose users' passwords?
 When setting a new password, lwat normally generates a reasonably safe
 password. Choosing this option will allow administrators to choose
 the password themselves.

Template: lwat/templates
Type: select
__Choices: None, user/admin, educational institution, old debian-edu/skolelinux
Default: user/admin
_Description: User account creation template:
 Lwat uses templates for creating user accounts, to make sure that
 home directories are placed in the right locations, users
 are members of the correct groups, etc.

Template: lwat/incompatiblesettings
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Fix 'smarty template' and 'compile dir' settings?
 Version 0.17 of lwat is incompatible with some values set in older
 configuration files. These settings must be fixed for lwat to work
 properly.
 .
 Please choose whether these settings should be fixed automatically.
Source: lwat
Section: misc
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Patrick Winnertz <winnie@debian.org>
Uploaders: Finn-Arne Johansen <faj@bzz.no>
Standards-Version: 3.7.3
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5), po-debconf, smarty-gettext
Homepage: http://bzz.no/lwat

Package: lwat
Architecture: all
Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0, libapache2-mod-php5, php5-ldap, php5, php5-cli, apache2, smarty-gettext
Suggests: wget
Description: LDAP Web-based Administration Tool
 This package aims to provide a fully functional interface,
 accessible via a web browser, for administration of users,
 groups, netgroups and hosts under LDAP.

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