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[RFR] templates://mimedefang/{templates}



Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the mimedefang source package.

This review will last from Tuesday, January 01, 2008 to Friday, January 11, 2008.

Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original
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Rationale:
--- ../mimedefang.old/debian/templates	2007-12-11 09:40:06.712314288 +0100
+++ debian/templates	2007-12-14 18:34:20.595534337 +0100
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Should MIMEDefang use the embedded Perl interpreter? 
- Choosing this option will significantly improve performance. However
- some systems do not support it. If in doubt, you can select this option.
+ Choosing this option is generally safe and will significantly improve
+ performance. However some systems do not support it.

Avoid repetition and simplify the paragraph.


--- ../mimedefang.old/debian/control	2007-12-11 09:40:06.712314288 +0100
+++ debian/control	2007-12-20 06:42:48.481294614 +0100
@@ -10,21 +10,19 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, debconf (>= 0.5) | debconf-2.0, libmime-perl, libio-stringy-perl, libmime-base64-perl, libmailtools-perl, libdigest-sha1-perl, libunix-syslog-perl, psmisc, adduser
 Recommends: tk8.3 | wish, sendmail
 Suggests: libmail-spamassassin-perl, sanitizer, libhtml-parser-perl, wv, libfile-scan-perl, clamav, libarchive-zip-perl, graphdefang
-Description: Electronic mail filter program for sendmail 8.12+
- MIMEDefang is an e-mail filter program which works with Sendmail 8.12
- and later.  MIMEDefang filters all e-mail messages sent via SMTP.
- MIMEDefang splits multi-part MIME messages into their components and
- potentially deletes or modifies the various parts.  It then
- reassembles the parts back into an e-mail message and sends it on its
- way.
+Description: e-mail filter program for sendmail

I'm not sure whether we've settled on "email" vs "e-mail"....

Anyway:
-avoid leading capital
-do not mention the sendmail's version


+ MIMEDefang is an e-mail filter program which processes all messages sent
+ via Sendmail. It splits multi-part MIME messages into their components
+ and can delete or modify those parts before reassembling the message and
+ sending it on its way.

Avoid repeating the program's name all over. Also, no mention of the
version of sendmail

 
 Package: graphdefang
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, libfile-readbackwards-perl, libgd-graph-perl, libgd-text-perl (>= 0.86-1), libtimedate-perl, libmldbm-perl, perl (>= 5.8.3) | libstorable-perl
 Recommends: php5
 Suggests: mimedefang
-Description: create graphs of your mimedefang spam and virus logs
- GraphDefang is a configurable perl utility that parses arbitrary
- syslog entries and creates a set of configurable charts (png files)
- with the data. It is possible to output the png files to the
- filesystem or to a web browser via a cgi.
+Description: create graphs from MIMEDefang's spam and virus logs
+ GraphDefang is a configurable utility that parses arbitrary
+ syslog entries and creates a set of configurable charts (PNG files)
+ with the data. These files can be written on disk or displayed by a
+ web server through a CGI interface.

There is not much value added  to mention this is Perl or whatever else.

s/png/PNG

Style changes to have a better flow in the wording (imho..:-))

"a cgi" has no meaning --> "CGI interface" sounds better.


-- 


Template: mimedefang/embedperl
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Should MIMEDefang use the embedded Perl interpreter? 
 Choosing this option is generally safe and will significantly improve
 performance. However some systems do not support it.
--- mimedefang.old/debian/templates	2007-12-11 09:40:06.712314288 +0100
+++ mimedefang/debian/templates	2007-12-14 18:34:20.595534337 +0100
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Should MIMEDefang use the embedded Perl interpreter? 
- Choosing this option will significantly improve performance. However
- some systems do not support it. If in doubt, you can select this option.
+ Choosing this option is generally safe and will significantly improve
+ performance. However some systems do not support it.
--- mimedefang.old/debian/control	2007-12-11 09:40:06.712314288 +0100
+++ mimedefang/debian/control	2008-01-01 13:10:17.651279806 +0100
@@ -10,21 +10,19 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, debconf (>= 0.5) | debconf-2.0, libmime-perl, libio-stringy-perl, libmime-base64-perl, libmailtools-perl, libdigest-sha1-perl, libunix-syslog-perl, psmisc, adduser
 Recommends: tk8.3 | wish, sendmail
 Suggests: libmail-spamassassin-perl, sanitizer, libhtml-parser-perl, wv, libfile-scan-perl, clamav, libarchive-zip-perl, graphdefang
-Description: Electronic mail filter program for sendmail 8.12+
- MIMEDefang is an e-mail filter program which works with Sendmail 8.12
- and later.  MIMEDefang filters all e-mail messages sent via SMTP.
- MIMEDefang splits multi-part MIME messages into their components and
- potentially deletes or modifies the various parts.  It then
- reassembles the parts back into an e-mail message and sends it on its
- way.
+Description: e-mail filter program for sendmail
+ MIMEDefang is an e-mail filter program which processes all messages sent
+ via Sendmail. It splits multi-part MIME messages into their components
+ and can delete or modify those parts before reassembling the message and
+ sending it on its way.
 
 Package: graphdefang
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, libfile-readbackwards-perl, libgd-graph-perl, libgd-text-perl (>= 0.86-1), libtimedate-perl, libmldbm-perl, perl (>= 5.8.3) | libstorable-perl
 Recommends: php5
 Suggests: mimedefang
-Description: create graphs of your mimedefang spam and virus logs
- GraphDefang is a configurable perl utility that parses arbitrary
- syslog entries and creates a set of configurable charts (png files)
- with the data. It is possible to output the png files to the
- filesystem or to a web browser via a cgi.
+Description: create graphs from MIMEDefang's spam and virus logs
+ GraphDefang is a configurable utility that parses arbitrary
+ syslog entries and creates a set of configurable charts (PNG files)
+ with the data. These files can be written on disk or displayed by a
+ web server through a CGI interface.
Source: mimedefang
Section: mail
Priority: extra
Maintainer: Christoph Martin <christoph.martin@uni-mainz.de>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5), libmilter-dev, mailx, libunix-syslog-perl, libperl-dev, libmime-perl, libdigest-sha1-perl, libmail-spamassassin-perl, sanitizer, libhtml-parser-perl, libfile-scan-perl, libarchive-zip-perl
Standards-Version: 3.6.1

Package: mimedefang
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, debconf (>= 0.5) | debconf-2.0, libmime-perl, libio-stringy-perl, libmime-base64-perl, libmailtools-perl, libdigest-sha1-perl, libunix-syslog-perl, psmisc, adduser
Recommends: tk8.3 | wish, sendmail
Suggests: libmail-spamassassin-perl, sanitizer, libhtml-parser-perl, wv, libfile-scan-perl, clamav, libarchive-zip-perl, graphdefang
Description: e-mail filter program for sendmail
 MIMEDefang is an e-mail filter program which processes all messages sent
 via Sendmail. It splits multi-part MIME messages into their components
 and can delete or modify those parts before reassembling the message and
 sending it on its way.

Package: graphdefang
Architecture: any
Depends: ${perl:Depends}, libfile-readbackwards-perl, libgd-graph-perl, libgd-text-perl (>= 0.86-1), libtimedate-perl, libmldbm-perl, perl (>= 5.8.3) | libstorable-perl
Recommends: php5
Suggests: mimedefang
Description: create graphs from MIMEDefang's spam and virus logs
 GraphDefang is a configurable utility that parses arbitrary
 syslog entries and creates a set of configurable charts (PNG files)
 with the data. These files can be written on disk or displayed by a
 web server through a CGI interface.

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