Re: [RFR] templates://fltk1.1/{libfltk1.1-dev.templates}

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Subject: Re: [RFR] templates://fltk1.1/{libfltk1.1-dev.templates}
From: Justin B Rye <jbr@edlug.org.uk>
Date: Thu, 8 Nov 2007 21:05:31 +0000
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Aaron M. Ucko wrote:
> Christian Perrier <bubulle@debian.org> writes:
>> Use passive voice instead of discouraged use of first person.
> 
> I tend to find passive constructs ("... is recommended" in this case)
> awkward; perhaps "... is advisable"?

How about (simpler, but still with a passive):

   [...] However, the 
   lowercase-h names are deprecated and should be eliminated from
   source code.
-- 
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)

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