Re: [RFR] templates://postgresql-common/{postgresql-common.templates}
Christian Perrier <bubulle@debian.org> wrote:
> - The old server and client packages are not supported any more. After
> - having upgraded the existing clusters, you should remove the
> - postgresql-${old} and postgresql-client-${old} packages.
> + The old server and client packages are not supported anymore. After
> + upgrading the existing clusters, the
> + postgresql-${old} and postgresql-client-${old} packages should be removed.
>
> "any more" or "anymore". Native speakers, could you please confirm
> that my change is correct?
No, it's two words: any more. I think "no longer supported" would be
more accurate in that phrase.
> Ditto for the tense change. "having upgraded" is what I would say in
> first stance....and I'm often wrong on English tenses just like many
> French people.
I'm not sure it matters there, but "After upgrading" seems clearer.
> -Description: manager for PostgreSQL database clusters
> - postgresql-common provides a structure under which multiple versions of
> +Description: PostgreSQL database clusters manager
> + The postgresql-common package provides a structure under which multiple versions of
> PostgreSQL may be installed and/or multiple clusters maintained at one
> time.
>
> Revert the words in the short description
(Reverse, not revert?)
Hope that helps,
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