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Re: [RFR] templates://dibbler/{dibbler-client.templates,dibbler-relay.templates,dibbler-server.templates}



> >  The Dibbler client can be configured to be launched when the system
> >  is started. If you choose this option, this host will have a correct
> >  IPv6 setup after booting. Please check whether a DHCPv6 server is
>                                     ensure that

OK.

> > started. If you choose this option, this node will then forward 
> > DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.         
> 
> That "then" should either replace the comma or be dropped; in this
> position it sounds like a statement about when it'll happen.
> 
>   started. If you choose this option, this node will forward DHCPv6
>   messages between clients, servers and other relays.

OK, modified in both places.


> 
> Likewise in dibbler-server/start.
> 
> > Template: dibbler-relay/config
> > Type: note
> > _Description: Required changes to /etc/dibbler/relay.conf
> 
> Here and elsewhere, use:
>   _Description: Changes to /etc/dibbler/relay.conf are required
>   _Description: Changes to /etc/dibbler/server.conf are required

Actually, after agreement with the maintainer, these tempaltes, which
are debconf abuse, will be remobed.


> > Package: dibbler-client
> ...
> > Description: portable DHCPv6 client
> ...
> >  option renewal. Installing Dibbler allows obtainin IPv6 addresses and
>                                              obtaining


Aaaargh, for once I got it right and did not write "allow to
obtain". Dammit.


Thanks for the careful review, Justin.


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