Re: [RFR] templates://dibbler/{dibbler-client.templates,dibbler-relay.templates,dibbler-server.templates}
Christian Perrier wrote:
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Nothing very major:
> Template: dibbler-client/start
...
> The Dibbler client can be configured to be launched when the system
> is started. If you choose this option, this host will have a correct
> IPv6 setup after booting. Please check whether a DHCPv6 server is
ensure that
> available on the network.
> Template: dibbler-relay/start
...
> started. If you choose this option, this node will then forward
> DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.
That "then" should either replace the comma or be dropped; in this
position it sounds like a statement about when it'll happen.
started. If you choose this option, this node will forward DHCPv6
messages between clients, servers and other relays.
Likewise in dibbler-server/start.
> Template: dibbler-relay/config
> Type: note
> _Description: Required changes to /etc/dibbler/relay.conf
Here and elsewhere, use:
_Description: Changes to /etc/dibbler/relay.conf are required
_Description: Changes to /etc/dibbler/server.conf are required
> Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the Dibbler
relay
> will most likely refuse to start or will not forward DHCPv6 messages
> as expected.
> Template: dibbler-server/start
...
> _Description: Should the Dibbler server be launched when the system starts?
> The Dibbler server can be configured to be launched when the system
> is started. If you choose this option, this node will then act as a
act as a
> DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
> configuration options to other nodes in the network.
And there's one typo in the control file:
> Package: dibbler-client
...
> Description: portable DHCPv6 client
...
> option renewal. Installing Dibbler allows obtainin IPv6 addresses and
obtaining
> options from a DHCPv6 server.
> .
> Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
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JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
--- ../dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-client.templates 2007-06-27 17:29:34.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/dibbler-client.templates 2007-06-27 17:33:18.000000000 +0100
@@ -5,10 +5,11 @@
Template: dibbler-client/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-client to start when system starts?
- Dibbler client can be configured to start at boot, so your host will have
- IPv6 set up after boot. This is generally a good idea. Make sure that
- there is a DHCPv6 server available in your network.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler client be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler client can be configured to be launched when the system
+ is started. If you choose this option, this host will have a correct
+ IPv6 setup after booting. Please ensure that a DHCPv6 server is
+ available on the network.
Template: dibbler-client/interfaces
Type: string
@@ -21,8 +22,8 @@
Template: dibbler-client/options
Type: multiselect
-_Choices: dns, domain
+__Choices: dns, domain
Default: dns
-_Description: What additional parameters should be obtained:
- The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supply additional
+_Description: Additional parameters to obtain:
+ The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supplies additional
configuration parameters.
--- ../dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-relay.templates 2007-06-27 17:29:35.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/dibbler-relay.templates 2007-06-27 18:11:02.000000000 +0100
@@ -5,12 +5,14 @@
Template: dibbler-relay/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-relay to start when the system starts?
- Dibbler relay can be configured to start at boot. This node will then
- forward DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler relay be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler relay can be configured to be launched when the system is
+ started. If you choose this option, this node will forward DHCPv6
+ messages between clients, servers and other relays.
Template: dibbler-relay/config
Type: note
-_Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/relay.conf before running the relay
- Without proper modifications, the relay will most likely refuse to start
- or will not forward DHCPv6 messages as expected.
+_Description: Changes to /etc/dibbler/relay.conf are required
+ Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the Dibbler
+ relay will most likely refuse to start or will not forward DHCPv6
+ messages as expected.
--- ../dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-server.templates 2007-06-27 17:29:37.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/dibbler-server.templates 2007-06-27 18:07:47.000000000 +0100
@@ -5,13 +5,15 @@
Template: dibbler-server/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-server to start when the system starts?
- Dibbler server can be configured to start at boot. This node will then act
- as a DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
- configuration options to other nodes in the network.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler server be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler server can be configured to be launched when the system
+ is started. If you choose this option, this node will act as a DHCPv6
+ server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional configuration
+ options to other nodes in the network.
Template: dibbler-server/config
Type: note
-_Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/server.conf before running the server
- Without proper modifications, the Dibbler server will most likely offer
- invalid addresses and options when started.
+_Description: Changes to /etc/dibbler/server.conf are required
+ Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the
+ Dibbler server will most likely offer invalid addresses and options
+ when started.
--- ../dibbler.old/debian/control 2007-06-27 17:29:38.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/control 2007-06-27 17:31:26.000000000 +0100
@@ -11,10 +11,11 @@
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 server
- This is a DHCPv6 server. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
- granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting) autoconfiguration
- modes of DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also supported. This package allows
- IPv6 hosts to be automatically configured in your network.
+ The Dibbler server supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
+ granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting)
+ autoconfiguration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also
+ supported. This package allows IPv6 hosts to be automatically
+ configured on the network.
.
Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
@@ -23,11 +24,12 @@
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22), ucf
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 client
- This is a DHCPv6 client. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
- granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting) autoconfiguration
- modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic capabilities, it supports
- various DHCPv6 extensions, e.g. option renewal. Install Dibbler client if
- this host should obtain IPv6 addresses and options from a DHCPv6 server.
+ The Dibbler client supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
+ granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting)
+ autoconfiguration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic
+ capabilities, it supports various DHCPv6 extensions, for instance
+ option renewal. Installing Dibbler allows obtaining IPv6 addresses
+ and options from a DHCPv6 server.
.
Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
@@ -36,10 +38,10 @@
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 relay
- This is a DHCPv6 relay. Relays are used as proxies between servers and
- clients. Their main advantage is the ability to support multiple remote
- links using only one server. Install Dibbler relay if you want to serve
- multiple not physically connected links with one DHCPv6 server.
+ Relays are used as proxies between servers and clients. Their main
+ advantage is the ability to support multiple remote links using only
+ one server. Installing Dibbler relay allows serving multiple, not
+ physically connected, links with one DHCPv6 server.
.
Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
@@ -48,11 +50,11 @@
Section: doc
Depends:
Suggests: dibbler-server, dibbler-client, dibbler-relay
-Description: documentation for dibbler
+Description: documentation for Dibbler
This package includes both user and developer documentation, covering all
- acpects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
- - server, client and relay usage and configuration
- - various tips and frequently asked questions
- - internal structure/code description and hints for developers
+ aspects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
+ - server, client and relay usage and configuration;
+ - various tips and frequently asked questions;
+ - internal structure/code description and hints for developers.
.
Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
Template: dibbler-client/title
Type: title
_Description: dibbler-client: DHCPv6 client
Template: dibbler-client/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Should the Dibbler client be launched when the system starts?
The Dibbler client can be configured to be launched when the system
is started. If you choose this option, this host will have a correct
IPv6 setup after booting. Please ensure that a DHCPv6 server is
available on the network.
Template: dibbler-client/interfaces
Type: string
Default: eth0
_Description: Interfaces to be configured:
Dibbler can configure any or all of a computer's network interfaces.
.
More than one interface may be specified by separating the interface names
with spaces.
Template: dibbler-client/options
Type: multiselect
__Choices: dns, domain
Default: dns
_Description: Additional parameters to obtain:
The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supplies additional
configuration parameters.
Template: dibbler-relay/title
Type: title
_Description: dibbler-relay: DHCPv6 relay
Template: dibbler-relay/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Should the Dibbler relay be launched when the system starts?
The Dibbler relay can be configured to be launched when the system is
started. If you choose this option, this node will forward DHCPv6
messages between clients, servers and other relays.
Template: dibbler-relay/config
Type: note
_Description: Changes to /etc/dibbler/relay.conf are required
Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the Dibbler
relay will most likely refuse to start or will not forward DHCPv6
messages as expected.
Template: dibbler-server/title
Type: title
_Description: dibbler-server: DHCPv6 server
Template: dibbler-server/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Should the Dibbler server be launched when the system starts?
The Dibbler server can be configured to be launched when the system
is started. If you choose this option, this node will act as a DHCPv6
server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional configuration
options to other nodes in the network.
Template: dibbler-server/config
Type: note
_Description: Changes to /etc/dibbler/server.conf are required
Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the
Dibbler server will most likely offer invalid addresses and options
when started.
Source: dibbler
Section: admin
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Tomasz Mrugalski <thomson@klub.com.pl>
Uploaders: Bartosz Fenski <fenio@debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 4.0.0), dpatch, po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.7.2
Package: dibbler-server
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 server
The Dibbler server supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting)
autoconfiguration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also
supported. This package allows IPv6 hosts to be automatically
configured on the network.
.
Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
Package: dibbler-client
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22), ucf
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 client
The Dibbler client supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting)
autoconfiguration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic
capabilities, it supports various DHCPv6 extensions, for instance
option renewal. Installing Dibbler allows obtaining IPv6 addresses
and options from a DHCPv6 server.
.
Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
Package: dibbler-relay
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 relay
Relays are used as proxies between servers and clients. Their main
advantage is the ability to support multiple remote links using only
one server. Installing Dibbler relay allows serving multiple, not
physically connected, links with one DHCPv6 server.
.
Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
Package: dibbler-doc
Architecture: all
Section: doc
Depends:
Suggests: dibbler-server, dibbler-client, dibbler-relay
Description: documentation for Dibbler
This package includes both user and developer documentation, covering all
aspects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
- server, client and relay usage and configuration;
- various tips and frequently asked questions;
- internal structure/code description and hints for developers.
.
Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
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