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[RFR] templates://dibbler/{dibbler-client.templates,dibbler-relay.templates,dibbler-server.templates}



Please find, for review, the debconf templates of dibbler.

This review will last from Wednesday, June 27, 2007 to Saturday, July 07, 2007.

Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original
files. Comments about your proposed changes will be appreciated.

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"[RFRn]" (n>=2) as a subject tag.

When we will reach a consensus, I send a "Last Chance For
Comments" mail with "[LCFC]" as a subject tag.

Finally, the reviewed templates will be sent to the package maintainer
as a bug report, and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as
a subject tag.


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Template: dibbler-client/title
Type: title
_Description: dibbler-client: DHCPv6 client

Template: dibbler-client/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Should the Dibbler client be launched when the system starts?
 The Dibbler client can be configured to be launched when the system
 is started. If you choose this option, this host will have a correct
 IPv6 setup after booting. Please check whether a DHCPv6 server is
 available on the network.

Template: dibbler-client/interfaces
Type: string
Default: eth0
_Description: Interfaces to be configured:
 Dibbler can configure any or all of a computer's network interfaces.
 .
 More than one interface may be specified by separating the interface names
 with spaces.

Template: dibbler-client/options
Type: multiselect
__Choices: dns, domain
Default: dns
_Description: Additional parameters to obtain:
 The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supplies additional
 configuration parameters.
Template: dibbler-relay/title
Type: title
_Description: dibbler-relay: DHCPv6 relay

Template: dibbler-relay/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Should the Dibbler relay be launched when the system starts?
 The Dibbler relay can be configured to be launched when the system is
 started. If you choose this option, this node will then forward
 DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.

Template: dibbler-relay/config
Type: note
_Description: Required changes to /etc/dibbler/relay.conf
 Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the Dibbler
 will most likely refuse to start or will not forward DHCPv6 messages
 as expected.
Template: dibbler-server/title
Type: title
_Description: dibbler-server: DHCPv6 server

Template: dibbler-server/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Should the Dibbler server be launched when the system starts?
 The Dibbler server can be configured to be launched when the system
 is started. If you choose this option, this node will then act as a
 DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
 configuration options to other nodes in the network.

Template: dibbler-server/config
Type: note
_Description: Required changes to /etc/dibbler/server.conf
 Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the
 Dibbler server will most likely offer invalid addresses and options
 when started.
--- ../dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-client.templates	2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 +0200
+++ debian/dibbler-client.templates	2007-06-26 20:29:13.547444684 +0200
@@ -5,10 +5,11 @@
 Template: dibbler-client/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-client to start when system starts?
- Dibbler client can be configured to start at boot, so your host will have
- IPv6 set up after boot. This is generally a good idea. Make sure that
- there is a DHCPv6 server available in your network.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler client be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler client can be configured to be launched when the system
+ is started. If you choose this option, this host will have a correct
+ IPv6 setup after booting. Please check whether a DHCPv6 server is
+ available on the network.
 
 Template: dibbler-client/interfaces
 Type: string
@@ -21,8 +22,8 @@
 
 Template: dibbler-client/options
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: dns, domain
+__Choices: dns, domain
 Default: dns
-_Description: What additional parameters should be obtained:
- The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supply additional
+_Description: Additional parameters to obtain:
+ The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supplies additional
  configuration parameters.
--- ../dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-relay.templates	2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 +0200
+++ debian/dibbler-relay.templates	2007-06-27 07:24:15.601956967 +0200
@@ -5,12 +5,14 @@
 Template: dibbler-relay/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-relay to start when the system starts?
- Dibbler relay can be configured to start at boot. This node will then
- forward DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler relay be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler relay can be configured to be launched when the system is
+ started. If you choose this option, this node will then forward
+ DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.
 
 Template: dibbler-relay/config
 Type: note
-_Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/relay.conf before running the relay
- Without proper modifications, the relay will most likely refuse to start
- or will not forward DHCPv6 messages as expected.
+_Description: Required changes to /etc/dibbler/relay.conf
+ Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the Dibbler
+ will most likely refuse to start or will not forward DHCPv6 messages
+ as expected.
--- ../dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-server.templates	2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 +0200
+++ debian/dibbler-server.templates	2007-06-26 20:29:16.047321761 +0200
@@ -5,13 +5,15 @@
 Template: dibbler-server/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-server to start when the system starts?
- Dibbler server can be configured to start at boot. This node will then act
- as a DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
+_Description: Should the Dibbler server be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler server can be configured to be launched when the system
+ is started. If you choose this option, this node will then act as a
+ DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
  configuration options to other nodes in the network.
 
 Template: dibbler-server/config
 Type: note
-_Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/server.conf before running the server
- Without proper modifications, the Dibbler server will most likely offer
- invalid addresses and options when started.
+_Description: Required changes to /etc/dibbler/server.conf
+ Without proper modifications to its configuration file, the
+ Dibbler server will most likely offer invalid addresses and options
+ when started.
--- ../dibbler.old/debian/control	2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 +0200
+++ debian/control	2007-06-26 20:32:29.037827185 +0200
@@ -11,10 +11,11 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 server
- This is a DHCPv6 server. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address 
- granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting) autoconfiguration 
- modes of DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also supported. This package allows
- IPv6 hosts to be automatically configured in your network.
+ The Dibbler server supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
+ granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting)
+ autoconfiguration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also
+ supported. This package allows IPv6 hosts to be automatically
+ configured on the network.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
  
@@ -23,11 +24,12 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22), ucf
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 client
- This is a DHCPv6 client. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
- granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting) autoconfiguration
- modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic capabilities, it supports
- various DHCPv6 extensions, e.g. option renewal. Install Dibbler client if
- this host should obtain IPv6 addresses and options from a DHCPv6 server.
+ The Dibbler client supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
+ granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting)
+ autoconfiguration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic
+ capabilities, it supports various DHCPv6 extensions, for instance
+ option renewal. Installing Dibbler allows obtainin IPv6 addresses and
+ options from a DHCPv6 server.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
 
@@ -36,10 +38,10 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 relay
- This is a DHCPv6 relay. Relays are used as proxies between servers and
- clients. Their main advantage is the ability to support multiple remote 
- links using only one server. Install Dibbler relay if you want to serve 
- multiple not physically connected links with one DHCPv6 server.
+ Relays are used as proxies between servers and clients. Their main
+ advantage is the ability to support multiple remote links using only
+ one server. Installing Dibbler relay allows serving multiple, not
+ physically connected, links with one DHCPv6 server.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
 
@@ -48,11 +50,11 @@
 Section: doc
 Depends:
 Suggests: dibbler-server, dibbler-client, dibbler-relay
-Description: documentation for dibbler
+Description: documentation for Dibbler
  This package includes both user and developer documentation, covering all
- acpects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
-  - server, client and relay usage and configuration
-  - various tips and frequently asked questions
-  - internal structure/code description and hints for developers
+ aspects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
+  - server, client and relay usage and configuration;
+  - various tips and frequently asked questions;
+  - internal structure/code description and hints for developers.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
Source: dibbler
Section: admin
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Tomasz Mrugalski <thomson@klub.com.pl>
Uploaders: Bartosz Fenski <fenio@debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 4.0.0), dpatch, po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.7.2

Package: dibbler-server
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 server
 The Dibbler server supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
 granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting)
 autoconfiguration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also
 supported. This package allows IPv6 hosts to be automatically
 configured on the network.
 .
  Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
 
Package: dibbler-client
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22), ucf
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 client
 The Dibbler client supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
 granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting)
 autoconfiguration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic
 capabilities, it supports various DHCPv6 extensions, for instance
 option renewal. Installing Dibbler allows obtainin IPv6 addresses and
 options from a DHCPv6 server.
 .
  Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/

Package: dibbler-relay
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
Recommends: dibbler-doc
Description: portable DHCPv6 relay
 Relays are used as proxies between servers and clients. Their main
 advantage is the ability to support multiple remote links using only
 one server. Installing Dibbler relay allows serving multiple, not
 physically connected, links with one DHCPv6 server.
 .
  Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/

Package: dibbler-doc
Architecture: all
Section: doc
Depends:
Suggests: dibbler-server, dibbler-client, dibbler-relay
Description: documentation for Dibbler
 This package includes both user and developer documentation, covering all
 aspects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
  - server, client and relay usage and configuration;
  - various tips and frequently asked questions;
  - internal structure/code description and hints for developers.
 .
  Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/

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