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Re: [RFR] templates://avelsieve/{templates}



Am Sonntag, 20. Mai 2007 10:22 schrieb Christian Perrier:
> Please find, for review, the debconf templates of avelsieve.

Shouldn't it be "SquirrelMail" instead of "Squirrelmail" (unless we are 
referring to the package or the binary)?

Is the "STMP" in the control file a typo (SMTP) or does this protocol exist?

Diff is against control.

Rationale:

- provides a wizard-like interface that, in the end, creates part of a
+ provides a wizard-like interface that creates part of a

- only a subset of Sieve's functionality; the main goal was to provide
- a simple interface for Joe User to create server-side filters without
+ only a subset of Sieve's functionality; the main goal is to provide
+ a simple interface for normal users to create server-side filters without

Drop slang and simplify the sentences.
 
- Cyrus is a fully-featured IMAP daemon, with a number of features not found 
in
- other IMAP implementations.
+ Cyrus is a fully-featured IMAP daemon.

Unless the features are named, there is no information at all in the second 
part. Also, such statements require monitoring other IMAP-daemons, as they 
might catch up feature-wise.


	Thomas
diff -r ace54c1d645f control
--- a/control	Sun May 20 19:52:12 2007 +0200
+++ b/control	Sun May 20 19:58:45 2007 +0200
@@ -12,18 +12,17 @@ Description: Sieve mail filters plugin f
 Description: Sieve mail filters plugin for Squirrelmail
  Avelsieve is a Squirrelmail plugin for creating Sieve scripts on a
  Cyrus IMAP server that runs timsieved (Tim's Sieve daemon). It
- provides a wizard-like interface that, in the end, creates part of a
+ provides a wizard-like interface that creates part of a
  Sieve script, a so-called 'rule'. It then assembles all the rules to
  form a Sieve script. For the sake of user-friendliness, it provides
- only a subset of Sieve's functionality; the main goal was to provide
- a simple interface for Joe User to create server-side filters without
+ only a subset of Sieve's functionality; the main goal is to provide
+ a simple interface for normal users to create server-side filters without
  knowing anything about the language itself.
  .
  SquirrelMail is a standards-based webmail package written in PHP. It runs on
  top of any IMAP server and includes support for the STMP protocol.
  .
- Cyrus is a fully-featured IMAP daemon, with a number of features not found in
- other IMAP implementations.
+ Cyrus is a fully-featured IMAP daemon.
  .
  Sieve is a server-side email filtering system related to Cyrus and
  Squirrelmail.

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