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[RFR] templates://avelsieve/{templates}



Please find, for review, the debconf templates of avelsieve.

This review will last from Sunday, May 20, 2007 to Wednesday, May 30, 2007.

Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original
files. Comments about your proposed changes will be appreciated.

Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.

When appropriate, I will send intermediate requests for review, with
"[RFRn]" (n>=2) as a subject tag.

When we will reach a consensus, I send a "Last Chance For
Comments" mail with "[LCFC]" as a subject tag.

Finally, the reviewed templates will be sent to the package maintainer
as a bug report, and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as
a subject tag.

Rationale for proposed changes:

 Template: avelsieve/runconfig
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Activate avelsieve automaticaly after installation?
- It is important to activate this squirrelmail plugin by running
- squirrelmail-configure. This can be done automaticaly here.
+_Description: Activate avelsieve automatically after installation?

Typo

+ Avelsieve will operate properly only if it has been activated by running
+ 'squirrelmail-configure'. This can be done automatically now.

More factual wording.

Quote the command name

s/here/now and typo
 
 Template: avelsieve/no_purge
-Type: note
-_Description: Installed sieve filters will not be removed!
- Because users of your Squirrelmail installation possibly don't have access
+Type: error

Error templates are better handled in debconf and are given better
priority. That's a though case, here...:)

+_Description: No removal of installed sieve filters

No exclamation mark and be more factual


+ Because users of the Squirrelmail installation possibly don't have access

s/your/the: depersonnification...:)

  to sieveshell they might not be able to remove existing filters they made
- through avelsieve. Those filters are NOT removed (even if you purge
- avelsieve).
+ through avelsieve. Those filters are NOT removed even when the
+ package is purged.

also depersonnification. I might be wrong with tenses...:)

  .
- Please remember to administrate your sieve filters for all mailboxes now
- manually!
+ The sieve filters for all mailboxes should be checked as soon as
+ possible.

kill the evil exclamation mark....be factual, again.


--- /home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/INTENT/avelsieve/avelsieve.old/debian/control	2007-05-11 16:28:40.766109982 +0200
+++ /home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/INTENT/avelsieve/avelsieve/debian/control	2007-05-16 08:13:48.303271686 +0200
@@ -9,14 +9,15 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: squirrelmail (>= 2:1.4.9), ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: cyrus21-imapd | cyrus-imapd-2.2
-Description: Sieve Mail Filters Plugin for Squirrelmail
- Avelsieve is a Squirrelmail plugin for creating Sieve scripts on a Cyrus IMAP
- server that runs timsieved (Tim's Sieve daemon).
- It provides a wizard-like interface that, in the end, creates part of a Sieve
- script, a so called rule. It then assembles all the rules to form a Sieve
- script. For the sake of user-friendliness, it provides only a subset of Sieve's
- functionality; the main goal was to provide a simple interface for Joe User to
- create server-side filters without knowing anything about the language itself.
+Description: Sieve mail filters plugin for Squirrelmail

Remove The Extra Capitals

+ Avelsieve is a Squirrelmail plugin for creating Sieve scripts on a
+ Cyrus IMAP server that runs timsieved (Tim's Sieve daemon). It
+ provides a wizard-like interface that, in the end, creates part of a
+ Sieve script, a so-called 'rule'. It then assembles all the rules to
+ form a Sieve script. For the sake of user-friendliness, it provides
+ only a subset of Sieve's functionality; the main goal was to provide
+ a simple interface for Joe User to create server-side filters without
+ knowing anything about the language itself.
 
Just reformatting. This might deserve some rewording but I have no
good sugegstion.

 .
  SquirrelMail is a standards-based webmail package written in PHP. It runs on
  top of any IMAP server and includes support for the STMP protocol.
@@ -24,6 +25,7 @@
  Cyrus is a fully-featured IMAP daemon, with a number of features not found in
  other IMAP implementations.
  .
- Sieve is server-side email filtering brought to you through cyrus.
+ Sieve is a server-side email filtering system related to Cyrus and
+ Squirrelmail.

Missing article and remove the advertisement style.

Template: avelsieve/runconfig
Type: boolean
_Description: Activate avelsieve automatically after installation?
 Avelsieve will operate properly only if it has been activated by running
 'squirrelmail-configure'. This can be done automatically now.

Template: avelsieve/no_purge
Type: error
_Description: No removal of installed sieve filters
 Because users of the Squirrelmail installation possibly don't have access
 to sieveshell they might not be able to remove existing filters they made
 through avelsieve. Those filters are NOT removed even when the
 package is purged.
 .
 The sieve filters for all mailboxes should be checked as soon as
 possible.
--- ../avelsieve.old/debian/templates	2007-05-11 16:28:40.766109982 +0200
+++ debian/templates	2007-05-16 08:11:09.978073963 +0200
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 Template: avelsieve/runconfig
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Activate avelsieve automaticaly after installation?
- It is important to activate this squirrelmail plugin by running
- squirrelmail-configure. This can be done automaticaly here.
+_Description: Activate avelsieve automatically after installation?
+ Avelsieve will operate properly only if it has been activated by running
+ 'squirrelmail-configure'. This can be done automatically now.
 
 Template: avelsieve/no_purge
-Type: note
-_Description: Installed sieve filters will not be removed!
- Because users of your Squirrelmail installation possibly don't have access
+Type: error
+_Description: No removal of installed sieve filters
+ Because users of the Squirrelmail installation possibly don't have access
  to sieveshell they might not be able to remove existing filters they made
- through avelsieve. Those filters are NOT removed (even if you purge
- avelsieve).
+ through avelsieve. Those filters are NOT removed even when the
+ package is purged.
  .
- Please remember to administrate your sieve filters for all mailboxes now
- manually!
+ The sieve filters for all mailboxes should be checked as soon as
+ possible.
--- ../avelsieve.old/debian/control	2007-05-11 16:28:40.766109982 +0200
+++ debian/control	2007-05-16 08:13:48.303271686 +0200
@@ -9,14 +9,15 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: squirrelmail (>= 2:1.4.9), ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: cyrus21-imapd | cyrus-imapd-2.2
-Description: Sieve Mail Filters Plugin for Squirrelmail
- Avelsieve is a Squirrelmail plugin for creating Sieve scripts on a Cyrus IMAP
- server that runs timsieved (Tim's Sieve daemon).
- It provides a wizard-like interface that, in the end, creates part of a Sieve
- script, a so called rule. It then assembles all the rules to form a Sieve
- script. For the sake of user-friendliness, it provides only a subset of Sieve's
- functionality; the main goal was to provide a simple interface for Joe User to
- create server-side filters without knowing anything about the language itself.
+Description: Sieve mail filters plugin for Squirrelmail
+ Avelsieve is a Squirrelmail plugin for creating Sieve scripts on a
+ Cyrus IMAP server that runs timsieved (Tim's Sieve daemon).  It
+ provides a wizard-like interface that, in the end, creates part of a
+ Sieve script, a so-called 'rule'. It then assembles all the rules to
+ form a Sieve script. For the sake of user-friendliness, it provides
+ only a subset of Sieve's functionality; the main goal was to provide
+ a simple interface for Joe User to create server-side filters without
+ knowing anything about the language itself.
  .
  SquirrelMail is a standards-based webmail package written in PHP. It runs on
  top of any IMAP server and includes support for the STMP protocol.
@@ -24,6 +25,7 @@
  Cyrus is a fully-featured IMAP daemon, with a number of features not found in
  other IMAP implementations.
  .
- Sieve is server-side email filtering brought to you through cyrus.
+ Sieve is a server-side email filtering system related to Cyrus and
+ Squirrelmail.
  .
   Homepage: http://email.uoa.gr/projects/squirrelmail/avelsieve.php
Source: avelsieve
Section: web
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Jan Hauke Rahm <info@jhr-online.de>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5), dpatch, po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.7.2.2

Package: avelsieve
Architecture: all
Depends: squirrelmail (>= 2:1.4.9), ${misc:Depends}
Recommends: cyrus21-imapd | cyrus-imapd-2.2
Description: Sieve mail filters plugin for Squirrelmail
 Avelsieve is a Squirrelmail plugin for creating Sieve scripts on a
 Cyrus IMAP server that runs timsieved (Tim's Sieve daemon). It
 provides a wizard-like interface that, in the end, creates part of a
 Sieve script, a so-called 'rule'. It then assembles all the rules to
 form a Sieve script. For the sake of user-friendliness, it provides
 only a subset of Sieve's functionality; the main goal was to provide
 a simple interface for Joe User to create server-side filters without
 knowing anything about the language itself.
 .
 SquirrelMail is a standards-based webmail package written in PHP. It runs on
 top of any IMAP server and includes support for the STMP protocol.
 .
 Cyrus is a fully-featured IMAP daemon, with a number of features not found in
 other IMAP implementations.
 .
 Sieve is a server-side email filtering system related to Cyrus and
 Squirrelmail.
 .
  Homepage: http://email.uoa.gr/projects/squirrelmail/avelsieve.php

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