Re: [RFR] templates://ocsinventory-agent/ocsinventory-agent.templates
James Westby wrote:
> Please find, for review, the debconf templates of mysql-dfsg-5.0.
The templates I can't improve on; the control file on the other hand
has a couple of obvious non-nativisms. Diffs and revised versions
just for those attached; presumably other ocsinventory-* packages
need the same changes.
> Package: ocsinventory-agent
...
> Description: Hardware and software inventory tool (client)
> Open Computer and Software Inventory Next Generation is an application
> designed to help a network or system administrator keep track of the computers
> configuration and software that are installed on the network.
I assume "the computers configuration" here is intended to mean "the
configuration(s) of the computers". Looking at the homepage it
seems to me it should use the phrase "software and hardware
configurations".
> It also
> allows deploying softwares, commands or files on client computers.
Software is not a count noun; and you don't "deploy" commands. It
means scripts, I think.
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JBR
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Source: ocsinventory-agent
Section: net
Priority: extra
Maintainer: Pierre Chifflier <chifflier@inl.fr>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5), libxml-simple-perl, po-debconf, perl, quilt
Standards-Version: 3.7.2
Package: ocsinventory-agent
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, dmidecode, libxml-simple-perl, ucf, libnet-ip-perl, libcompress-zlib-perl, debconf (>= 0.5), libwww-perl, libnet-ssleay-perl, debconf (>= 0.2.26) | debconf-2.0, po-debconf
Description: Hardware and software inventory tool (client)
Open Computer and Software Inventory Next Generation is an application
designed to help a network or system administrator keep track of the software
and hardware configurations of computers on the network. It also supports
deploying software, files and configuration scripts to client computers.
.
This package contains the client part.
.
Homepage: http://ocsinventory.sourceforge.net
--- control~ 2007-04-14 17:00:29.000000000 +0100
+++ control 2007-04-14 17:09:48.000000000 +0100
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, dmidecode, libxml-simple-perl, ucf, libnet-ip-perl, libcompress-zlib-perl, debconf (>= 0.5), libwww-perl, libnet-ssleay-perl, debconf (>= 0.2.26) | debconf-2.0, po-debconf
Description: Hardware and software inventory tool (client)
Open Computer and Software Inventory Next Generation is an application
- designed to help a network or system administrator keep track of the computers
- configuration and software that are installed on the network. It also
- allows deploying softwares, commands or files on client computers.
+ designed to help a network or system administrator keep track of the software
+ and hardware configurations of computers on the network. It also supports
+ deploying software, files and configuration scripts to client computers.
.
This package contains the client part.
.
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