Re: Debconf rewrite project: review the rfr.txt mail
On (10/03/07 17:58), Christian Perrier wrote:
> Please find attached to this mail the second mail that will be used in
> the process.
>
> Please find, for rewiew, the debconf templates of <PACKAGE>.
review
> This review will last between <TODAY> and <TODAY+15>.
from ... to is more common.
> When appropriate, I will send intermediate requests for review, labelled
> "[RFRn]" (n>=2) in the Subject: field..
Extra full stop.
>
> When we will reach a consensus, I will send a "Last Chance For
> Comments" mail labeled with "[LCFC]" in the Subject: field
No need for the will, is that an artifact of your French heritage?
>
> Finally, the reviewed templates will be sent to the package maintainer
> as a bug report and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as
> label.
>
Added a comma, and "the label".
Thanks,
James
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Index: tmp/rfr.txt
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--- tmp.orig/rfr.txt 2007-03-10 19:50:49.000000000 +0000
+++ tmp/rfr.txt 2007-03-10 19:53:43.000000000 +0000
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-Please find, for rewiew, the debconf templates of <PACKAGE>.
+Please find, for review, the debconf templates of <PACKAGE>.
-This review will last between <TODAY> and <TODAY+15>.
+This review will last from <TODAY> to <TODAY+15>.
Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original
files. Comments about your proposed changes will be appreciated.
@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@
Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.
When appropriate, I will send intermediate requests for review, labelled
-"[RFRn]" (n>=2) in the Subject: field..
+"[RFRn]" (n>=2) in the Subject: field.
-When we will reach a consensus, I will send a "Last Chance For
-Comments" mail labeled with "[LCFC]" in the Subject: field
+When we reach a consensus, I will send a "Last Chance For Comments" mail
+labeled with "[LCFC]" in the Subject: field
Finally, the reviewed templates will be sent to the package maintainer
-as a bug report and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as
-label.
+as a bug report, and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as
+the label.
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