On Friday 21 April 2006 17:20, Wesley J. Landaker wrote:
> Okay, not totally done, I'll send the final part 3/3 in a few minutes.
> Here is everything before "Games":
And this is the rest. Again, I've tried to make very minimal changes just to
keep things consistent and grammatical. I hope these fixes are helpful. =)
> Games
> Games and recreations. This is top
> level section, do not put entries here.
Games and recreation. This is a top-level
^^^^^^^^^^ ^
section, do not put entries here.
(I wrote "the" instead of "a" for "Applications", but it should be "a" both
here and there, since there is more than one.)
> Adventure
> Role playing and adventure games,
> interactive movies and stories.
Role playing and adventure games,
interactive movies and stories, etc.
^^^^^^
> Strategy
> Games involving long term strategic thinking.
Games involving long-term strategic thinking.
^
> Tools [new]
> Server browsers, configurators, editors and other
> game related tools that are not games themselves.
Server browsers, configurators, editors, and other
^
game-related tools that are not games themselves.
^
> Toys
> Amusements, eye-candy, entertaining
> demos, screen hacks (screenavers) etc.
Amusements, eye-candy, entertaining
demos, screen hacks (screensavers), etc.
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^
> Screen
> Programs that affect the whole screen. This
> is top level section, do not put entries here.
Programs that affect the whole screen. This
is a top-level section, do not put entries here.
^ ^
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