On Friday 21 April 2006 15:07, Bill Allombert wrote: > At this point we would like you check that the menu sections name are > consistent from a grammatical point of view (that we are not mixing name > and adjective, singular and plural, etc.). For example should the > section for scientific software be named Science, Sciences, or > Scientific ? Some grammar corrections (easiest to see with fixed font). Where possible, I made the least intrusive change to make it correct. I may not have caught everything. (There are also some awkward sentences that are correct, but sound slightly funny--I didn't modify those, since you didn't seem to be asking for that.) This is A-N, I'll send O-W in a few minutes. > Applications [was:Apps] > Normal applications. This is top level > section, do not put entries here. Normal applications. This is the top-level ^^^ ^ section, do not put entries here. > Accessibility [new] > Tools to aid people with disabilities or > on machines lacking usual input devices. Tools to aid people with disabilities or for machines lacking usual input devices. ^^^ > Data Management [was:Databases] > Interactive database programs, collection > managers, bibliography tools etc. Interactive database programs, collection managers, bibliography tools, etc. ^ > Editors > Editors, other than office word processors, > for text based information. Editors, other than office word processors, for text-based information. ^ > Electronics [new] > Circuit design tools, simulators and > assemblers for microprocessors etc. Circuit design tools, simulators and assemblers for microprocessors, etc. ^ > Mathematics [was:Math] > Mathematics related software. Mathematics-related software. ^ > Mobile Devices [new] > Software that allows you to interface > with mobile devices (phones, PDA's etc.). Software that allows you to interface with mobile devices (phones, PDA's, etc.). ^ > Network [was:Net] > Network related software. This is three level > menu, do not put entries in second (this) level. Network related software. This is a three-level ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ section, do not put entries directly here. ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > Network/Communication [new] > Mail, USENET news, cht, instant messaging, > IP telephony, video conferencing software. Mail, USENET news, chat, instant messaging, ^^^^ IP telephony, video conferencing software, etc. ^^^^ > Network/File Transfer [new] > File transfer software such as download > managers, FTP clients, P2P clients. File transfer software such as download managers, FTP clients, P2P clients, etc. ^^^^ > Network/Web Browsing [new] > Web browsers, tools for offline browsing. > elinks, epiphany-browser, webhttrack Web browsers, tools for offline browsing, etc. ^^^^ > Network/Web News [new] > Web feed (RSS, Atom etc.) > and podcast aggregators. Web feed (RSS, Atom, etc.) ^ and podcast aggregators. -- Wesley J. Landaker <wjl@icecavern.net> <xmpp:wjl@icecavern.net> OpenPGP FP: 4135 2A3B 4726 ACC5 9094 0097 F0A9 8A4C 4CD6 E3D2
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