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Re: Please proofread README.Debian for fwanalog



* [ 15-03-05 - 14:17 ] Adam D. Barratt <debian+l10n-english@adam-barratt.org.uk> wrote: 
>  "Emanuele Rocca"  wrote, Tuesday, March 15, 2005 12:27 PM
>  
>  > I partially rewrote the README.Debian provided with fwanalog.
>  >
>  > Please proofread it, suggestions welcome.
>  
>  Not sure if the changes I've suggested affect your changes or the original
>  text, but I hope they're useful.

Many thanks for your corrections.
I'll apply them, but I am not sure of the following:

>  > WARNING: fwanalog output may be analized by a potential attacker
>  > to guess your firewall ruleset. It may be a good idea to restrict world
>  > access to these informations.
>  
>  s/analized/analysed/ and s/informations/information/.

Isn't the plural needed for 'informations'? 
They're more than one, as 'these' points out.

Thanks.
ciao,	
	ema

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